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Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Mar 04, 2020 5:49 pm · Chapter: The Camera Never Lies

Wow, great chapter.  Just hate Michael.  Wonderful writing.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Mar 04, 2020 5:30 pm · Chapter: The Camera Never Lies

That House Needs To Be Cleansed Immediately!!!!!

I do want Justin to hit him for every evil vile thing he has ever done to him, Brian, Ted, Emmett, Deb, Jenny, Gus, Ben, Hunter, David, Hank, Melanie, Carl, Jennifer, Everyone in Liberty Avenue for years but Michael would try to sue him.

So perhaps making him go fetal in fear with a huge wet spot would be better and much more fitting for the coward he truly is.

Michael was never man enough to take on Justin by himself or anyone else so prison will be an interesting experience for him since Brian won't be there to take the hits for him, the fool won't last a thirty minutes before he is in the hospital ward hopefully with his jaw shut?

Michael just couldn't stand that Justin is the one Brian chose to love and now no one will ever have Brian again especially Michael because once he is sentenced he will be forgotten just like Lindsay.

Ben is getting a big chance to change his life for the better thanks to Ted and his True Family who love him No Matter What!

I hope he finds the True Love of his life and he is able to give Hunter and Jenny a brother or sister to drive them all crazy with happiness.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Mar 04, 2020 5:18 pm · Chapter: The Camera Never Lies

I would say kinky if it has been for Brian and Justin's benefit only, but here it's weird and highly unhealthy.



Name: Devizes (Signed) · Date: Feb 23, 2020 4:02 pm · Chapter: The Truth Begins To Come Out

loving this story - well done



Name: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: Feb 19, 2020 7:58 am · Chapter: Hells Bells

Wow that was vicious Michael and I hope the nail in the hinge of the cell I hope he ends up in 



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Feb 18, 2020 9:07 pm · Chapter: The Truth Begins To Come Out

Oh, wow, what a chapter.  OMG, I hate Michael.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

You are about to hate him more...

Happy reading

Missmerlot [Nicole]



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Feb 18, 2020 8:21 pm · Chapter: The Truth Begins To Come Out

OMG.  I can't believe how idiotic Michael is.  I feel so sorry for Ben.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Feb 18, 2020 5:50 pm · Chapter: The Truth Begins To Come Out

Michael You Cold Hearted, Selfish Bastard!!

Prison is way to good for him he should be shot into a volcano along with Lindsay they are both so selfish cause they only see and hear what they want while ignoring that nothing is theirs to begin with.

Brian was just a commodity to them then Justin came along and with sheer determination he broke through Brian's walls and he touched the heart, a organ none of them ever could because they knew it they actually got to see into Brian's heart that there was no place for them beyond friendship.

Justin loves Brian flaws and all Michael and Lindsay only love the attention Brian gave them and they got for being associated with him, outside of Brian's spotlight they are invisible to everyone else which they hate.

Brian and Justin don't demand attention but they get because they were born for the light due to their innate kindness, Michael and Lindsay demand attention because they are full of darkness due to how selfish and self-centered they are, everyone is just needed for what they give them then they are tossed aside for the next person who will bring them attention.

Gus and Jenny were just pawns who were useful but the moment they outlived their usefulness they were tossed aside and ignored.

Michael is going to prison hopefully until the end of time and perhaps Lindsay will join him?

Thanks For the Update 😃

 



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Feb 18, 2020 4:51 pm · Chapter: The Truth Begins To Come Out

What a dense chapter! Well done! I love how Ted lets Michael know about the keys, the phone (287 times over five days!!!), the lofts and the fact that Justin owns the building. So much for a gold digger! Jenny is very funny. I love how Justin is getting embarrassed when Brian is explaining the sunburns...



Name: coleamber (Signed) · Date: Feb 18, 2020 12:38 pm · Chapter: The Truth Begins To Come Out

thanks for update



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jan 27, 2020 7:33 pm · Chapter: For Whom The Bell Tolls

So, Mikey had a secret garage that only him and Brian knew about? I'm surprised it was divulged to Ben over the years.

Well, once Brian and Justin's prints and blood are ruled out, the rest must belong to Michael, with the exception of the owner of the bat. But, how by getting hit in the knee, was it bleeding so profusely?

I whisper, but nobody answers ... ah, poor Mikey... my heart doth not bleed.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Consider that line stolen...my heart doth not bleed...brilliant.

MissMerlot



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Jan 27, 2020 5:46 pm · Chapter: Desperate Deflection and Deliberate Diversions

Wow... this is some the tale you're weaving... poor Mikey, just keeps digging himself in deeper and deeper. Does he realize the fact that he dumped the key in the disposal to get rid of the 'evidence'... he just threw a red flag saying, 'I'm guilty, I'm guilty!"

And now with the appearance of the car and bat...  dun, dun, dun, duuuunnnn...

I'm looking forward to his explanation for the bashing...

I must say, I was surprised by Russo's appearance... good guy????

I'm also surprised Lindsay didn't try t interject anything this chapter.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Jan 24, 2020 6:48 pm · Chapter: For Whom The Bell Tolls

Great update.  Love when Mikey is miserable. Don't like cliffhangers, but they keep the story interesting.  Fantastic writing.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jan 24, 2020 5:34 pm · Chapter: For Whom The Bell Tolls

Michael pinned all his hopes on a one sided fantasy that was never going to happen because he wanted to force Brian to love him out of obligation instead of just facing the truth that Brian Never loved hi beyond friendship.

Lindsay is the exact same way and it is what they will always lose cause Justin loved Brian beyond the mask while they loved the mask that helped them hang onto their fantasy that Would Never Come True.

Time for Michael and Lindsay to reap what they have sown.

Thanks For the Update 😃



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jan 24, 2020 5:00 pm · Chapter: For Whom The Bell Tolls

It feels weird to have Russo as a good guy.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jan 24, 2020 12:08 pm · Chapter: For Whom The Bell Tolls

Is Russo a good guy?  I hope so.



Name: coleamber (Signed) · Date: Jan 24, 2020 10:37 am · Chapter: For Whom The Bell Tolls

thanks for update



Name: BritinDynasty (Signed) · Date: Dec 19, 2019 5:30 am · Chapter: Desperate Deflection and Deliberate Diversions

Michel is a trouble, its bliss to see Michel in trouble himself. I gladly despise him.

 

Thankyou for this lovely update. Happy Holidays ðŸ™‚



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Dec 17, 2019 6:22 pm · Chapter: Desperate Deflection and Deliberate Diversions

Oh Shit On A Stick!

Michael Is Dust!

Lindsay is just Stale, Old Burnt Toast!

No Way Is Michael or Lindsay coming back from this.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Dec 17, 2019 4:57 pm · Chapter: Desperate Deflection and Deliberate Diversions

Great chapter.  Love when Michael is in trouble.  Dislike him so much.  Wonderful writing.  Happy Holidays to you.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Dec 17, 2019 4:35 pm · Chapter: Desperate Deflection and Deliberate Diversions

Tada!!! The end is the nail to Michael's coffin.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Dec 17, 2019 12:36 pm · Chapter: Desperate Deflection and Deliberate Diversions

Wow.  They found the key to the diner, how did Ben end up with a copy?  Russo is a good guy?  Amazing.  Where did they find the car?



Author's Response:

At Michael's insistence, as Ben mentioned, he made him take a copy of every key on his key ring. The car was in the garage that Michael has that Miller went to in Chapter 7.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot



Name: BritinDynasty (Signed) · Date: Dec 14, 2019 7:16 pm · Chapter: The Consequences of Being Cocksure

Before Justin, I don't think Anyone would gave any cents for Brian feeling or emotions. Michel really disgusts in name of friendship, the way he behaves with Brian & others.

Lovely chapter. Glad for Brian getting his happiness with his Sunshine. ðŸ™‚



Name: BritinDynasty (Signed) · Date: Dec 14, 2019 7:04 pm · Chapter: The Ring of Truth, Yes He Didn't Admit It...But He Never Denied it Either!

You are right. David did booted Michel Back. Michel then whined everyone ears off to coddle him. He is Still a 31 yrs f***ing moron & idiot. Good for Ben proving his intellingence too like David.

Mikey should proud of his New Dad Carl helping exposing his deeds. 😁 Too Good! *inner Emmett clapping.



Name: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: Nov 27, 2019 12:08 pm · Chapter: The Consequences of Being Cocksure

Looks like we have a conviction! Hip Hip Hooray! And Lindsay is going along! I hope they haul them in separately... we don't want no conspiring!

So, did Michael find Deb's set of keys at the diner? Do they have proof that Michael was the culprit... or is it speculation at this point? I'm thinking he didn't find the keys, seeing as he didn't return the keys to the loft. Or had too much time passed by then?

the record of that order... was this just currently? Did all of this stuff with Tiffany's just happen... and that's how it was solved now? Did Ben get the recording on his phone?

You are sure weaving some the plot! But, I loved Brian saying: I never knew how much I hated it until you weren’t able to do it anymore!

CLASSIC!

HUGS  ~Cathy



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