Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2019 10:47 am Title: But Was Thwarted and Now Enmeshed

Wow what a fantastic chapter I was so enthralled as I read every new detail being revealed 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2019 5:29 am Title: ...Then She Was Almost Victorious

Hmm, I'm finally getting around to catching up. I had two chapters tonight. How long is this dinner from Hell going to last? Although, I suppose it has to be long enough to get Michael's old car checked out. But, the topic of the actual bashing has fallen to the wayside.

And so many past secrets are coming to the light of day. Lindsay has really gotten it these last couple of chapters. Emmett had a couple of cute comments thrown in. Although, at the end of Chapter seven. Mel said something about finding out how Lindsay was involved in the bashing, yet we still have not learned. What a bitching, witch Lindsay is though. It sounds like Mel had agreed to use Brian as the father for JR, and Lindsay lied about it. And what did Lindsay mean when she said: and you have provided me with an alibi. I'm leaving. HOW? I must have missed something.

Michael pointed out that ... “She knew about the prom date! She told me! And I did fall in the apartment like I said, so…” ... interesting to see where you are taking this!

I was a little confused occasionally as to who was talking... especially at the end of chapter nine. It sounded like Hunter and Justin were alone, and a second later, Gus was there. First, Justin says "you will never repeat this to Gus"  ... then ?Gus?  calls him Papa J, and Hunter tells Gus he's not neat, like Justin is. So, where did Gus come from?

But, it sounds like Lindsay kept all her exploits on the computer. No wonder she was nicknamed V3 and Mel was able to get rid of her. (By the way, is it V3 or 3V? You have used both so far.)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Hi Cathy, thanks for the review. The bashing is coming back full force in the next couple of chapters, but need to Lindsay in place as it were. Lindsay as you suspect does know morea about the bashing than she said and  then there's Ben to come as well.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2019 7:51 am Title: ...Then She Was Almost Victorious

I'm glad like Gus that Cynthia is not close to her. *Smiling cheekily* Wonderful, smackdowns & Lindsy nastyness thrown at her face.

While watching show, Michel & Lindsay always reminded The two sides of same coin, remain Unspent. Trying to lynch Brian to their sides like f**ing a Humpty & Dumpty.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2019 2:58 pm Title: ...Then She Was Almost Victorious

Emmett is such a reactive guy: the picture he took must be printed and displayed at the diner.

I love the expression "flexibility and enthusiasm" used to describe Lindsay's proclivity for extra marital activities.

Is Justin remembering the song from the prom without realizing it?

I also love when Michael learns about Brian and Ben at the white party.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2019 12:58 pm Title: How the Virulent Virago Got Vicious...

thanks for update

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 7:55 pm Title: How the Virulent Virago Got Vicious...

Wonderful! Just like the title. Vicious yet foaming. I like how Emmett ripped Lindsay a new one. Also her being bellows by Gus, Justin & Brian.

And Micheal seriously Needs to shut his petulant mouth. He is not one to speak.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 5:45 pm Title: How the Virulent Virago Got Vicious...

Michael and Lindsay are the kind of friends the Devil would avoid they only see their wants and needs while everyone else is just pawns to be used and later discard.

Lindsay going to slap Gus isn't surprising he is of no further use to get anymore so he is just another discarded article from her life to inflict pain upon when she can't get her way.

Lindsay like Michael can't stand that Justin and Gus are the most important people in Brian's life and it is hate they feel for both of them despite those pathetic denials that no one was Buying.

Emmett ripped off his pound of flesh but he like everyone else wants to rip Lindsay and Michael apart with his bare hands.

Now that Brian and Justin are Ready to expand their family while also getting married that will make Lindsay and Michael more determined to get rid of Justin.

Though if Lindsay tried to take on Cynthia that will seriously be the last move she ever makes on this earth lol

Thanks For the Update 😃 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 4:28 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

"Novotny and the Carrier": Gus really doesn't like them, which is not a big deal regarding Michael, but it's very sad that he feels like this towards his mother.

Debbie and Carl are a great pair, acting like teenagers full of hormones.

Mel is a huge help in this story.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2019 8:21 am Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Still really loving this story. 😍

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 3:16 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Spotlight keep spreading on moron. Kids are smart. But Who was hiding the evidence? Hope Carl got it. Michel & Lindsay will be in deep sh** by the end of it.

ThankYou for update. Like it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 12:41 am Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Took my rating away again. so here it is

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 6:06 pm Title: He May Be The Bore...But He's An Observant One!

Great update.  Wonderful writing.  Hope all is well with you.  Miss your udates.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 4:38 pm Title: He May Be The Bore...But He's An Observant One!

Lindsay is so mean when she considers Justin "disabled"!

Good idea the change of locks! It was time. It's strange that Lindsay didn't find out yet.