Reviews For The Last Dance
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Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2019 12:41 am Title: CHAPTER 1

So happy to read this new chapter. Have to feel sorry for David, who now realises just what type of man he was bringing into his son's life.  I hope he doesn't just send Michael home - he needs to let Vic or Brian know exactly what is going on. Looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.

I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turnsout.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 7:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

I have a strong feeling of "déjà vu" and I realize that there currently is another story from the same bunny. It should be interesting to see how both stories evolve.

Michael, with his small brain, thinks that the attack will fall on some straight student (why not Chris) so he will be able to go with the motion like he did nothing. What about the  blood he spat and the fingerprints on the bat? I hope he will feel safe for a moment and that the police will track him down, slowly, very slowly. It won't change anything regarding Justin's state, but it will be interesting to see if Michael finally goes to Portland or if he remains with Brian. I also hope that Daphne will find out who attacked her friend and will be able to speak her mind, loudly and publicly.



Author's Response:

Hey, Sno! Thank you for reading. You mentioned the other story. Yes, I am enjoying that one, myself. I think right now Michael has a sense of false security. Yes, he thinks Justin has had his last dance. Foolish man!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 6:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

well I would say I love it but you know I do! As usual, your work is great and I whenever i see an update um like taking my sweet time to read so the chapter won't end quickly. please don't leave us hanging too long! love xoxo lori



Author's Response:

Thanks Lori... you are always a bright spot. My beta has been pretty bogged down... but it should get better now. FYI... Next chapter is finished.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2019 2:56 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Absolutely loved the first chapter- your description of Micheals actions and his innner thoughts was really in character and believable for me.

I never personally saw Micheal as being much of a long term thinker- he is clearly more the type to react in the spur of the moment out of anger like you described here, when things don’t go the ways he wants. In the show we frequently see him take advantage of situations to be manipulative or hurtful and cause trouble when the opportunity has been presented to him. And when angry he lashes out causing maximum hurt and disruption for those around him when things don’t go his way, without really considering what he’s doing. 

What always really annoyed me in the show was that Micheal never had to deal with any consequences of his manipulations, inconsiderate behaviour or thoughtless nasty words... so I can’t wait to see where you take this and look forward to Micheal hopefully getting what he deserves for once ;)



Author's Response:

Just saw your review in my junk file. Sorry I haven't responded sooner.

I do plan on Michael not getting away with  it, no problem there. I agree with you how easily Michael always got away with being hateful. The Anniversary Party, Senator Baxter's party, the list goes on. So I have no problem sticking it to him.

Thanks so much for your support,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Lorma Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2019 3:27 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

What a coward!  Vile human being.  He’ll get his due.



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken so long to respond, but I just saw this.

Michael is exactly what you described him as... and yes, he will get his due!

Thanks for reading and reviewing. It means a lot!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2019 1:32 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Very different point of view.  Never heard it from Michael's crazy brain. Cool!



Author's Response:

I never put much past Michael... I think he's capable of all evil.

Thanks for readmg,

HUGS  ~Cathy

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2019 1:21 am Title: CHAPTER 1

Wow.  Can't wait to see how Mikey gets caught out.  He will be caught won't he?



Author's Response:

No fear of that... I never plan 'Michael Redemption' .... guilty!

Thanks for reading, Phyllis.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2019 3:15 am Title: CHAPTER 1

I love it! I really like the idea of Michael remembering his own failed prom night as the catalyst to his attack on Justin.

Michael’s reaction to watching Brian dance with Justin is a great example of his jealousy.

Thank you so much for taking up the bunny! I promise I will try to be patient while waiting for an update!

*Hugs*

Deb



Author's Response:

Thanks, Deb.  I do hope if they are not able to bring your bunnies back to life, that you have them all written down some place. and can start posting them soon. They are great inspiration. Anyway, I want to thank you again for this great idea you had.

The next chapter is already halfway written, so you won't have too long a wait.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 10:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

That little mutha... yeah, I'm emotionally charged right now, and wishing like hell that I had a death scene already in the works for Michael. I can't wait until he gets caught! Hopefully, that wonderful hunk of DNA sample he left within the garage will be noticed... and soon!

Looking forward to MORE!

HUGS and LOVE,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Ah, I gotta hand it to you, Nichelle, I was wondering if anyone would pick up on that little tidbt!  Congrats! 

Thanks for reading!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 7:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

So I didn't read it yet, I want to wait for a couple more chaps so I can enjoy a longer read but I am so effing happy um smiling like an idiot!!! um gonna be praying day and night for the next two chaps! but um probably gonna break and read before your update! happy dancing bitches. love. lori



Author's Response:

Lori, Lori, shame on you! Well then, just sit and wonder...  hehe

Next chapter will be posted soon, darlin.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 7:25 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Wow, really looking forward to more of this. Intriging plot-line and can't wait to see Deb's reaction when they find out what her baby has done "now".  But she'll find some way to blame Brian.

This is Michael to a T, reacting without thinking and selfish, so selfish, he thinks everything is about him.

Although one good thing, if Michael still plans on getting on that airplane...with his knee broken it's going to be agony for him, broken bone, possible bleeding on the inside of his kneecap, the pressure of the cabin on the plane, oh yeah, it will be severe agonizing pain.  Hell they might not even let him on the plane, but who knows.  

Can't wait for more, thank you for sharing your words with us.  

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bec... It's so nice to hear good things from writers you look up to. And I'm going to say it again, when is your next story coming out?

I have to tell you... your right... agonizing plane ride coming up....

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 7:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

OMG, this is so good.  I have disliked Mikey in so many stories (and he wasn't a favorite during the show), but now I truly HATE him.  You have written it so well to bring out the emotions perfectly.  Never would have thought of this take on the scene as everyone thought it was Hobbs.  Fantastic idea and writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks Marilynne, it means a lot for your continued support. Our dear, widdle Mikey is so easy to dislike/hate... it was fun to put his evil, jealousy to paper.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 6:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Oooh so happy tk see this, absolutely hooked!



Author's Response:

Thanks for checking it out, Nicole. I wasn't sure if I wanted mine posted first or not. When yours came out, I was happy to see it fifteen years later. As Deb said, everybody has different perspectives. And the fact yours will be MANY chapters, mine will be short and sweet. (well, not for Michael.)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2019 6:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 1

Awesome start!! Can't wait for more. Loving it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Sandy. It's always nice to hear something like that from a great writer as yourself,

HUGS  ~Cathy

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