Reviews For The Last Dance
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Reviewer: justinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2019 1:24 am Title: CHAPTER 2

Michael doesn't use what little brain cells he has. He's already forgotten he has flown before. So glad Cameron is already getting suspicious of Michaels knee injury.  Love this story. 



Author's Response:

I'm aware my response is very late in coming, so sorry about that. I'm trying to catch up on all of them tonight, especially with the last chapter ready to be posted.

I just wanted to extend a thank you for reading and reviewing all the time. I hope you enjoy how it all turnsout.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2019 1:32 am Title: CHAPTER 2

Is it wrong of me to hope that David keeps intentionally bumping the bastard's knee? I really do wonder what David will do with this new information. Considering that he's a doctor, he could lose his medical license due to withholding key information such as this. However, I understand how and why he is so desperate to make things work with Michael. The real question he needs to ask himself is: What could and would Michael do to him if he could have the heart to attempt to kill Justin based on some perceived slight?

Another question that should really be to the forefront of David's mind is: What would Michael possibly do to Hank if David didn't give the idiot enough attention the way Brian stopped doing when Justin entered the picture? If David takes the time to think rationally with a modicum of emotion about the consequences to himself and his son, then perhaps David will be so inclined to do the right thing NOW as opposed to waiting until he can't get rid of the murderous bastard in Portland. 

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

I have to wonder if you are somewhat of a mind reader, or do you have a long lens, powerful magnifying glass? Since the next chapter has been written for a while, I almost thought about adding that 'bumping knee' suggestion. But alas, reality settled in, and Michael is sitting in the aisle seat. Hmm, maybe there can be a late-comer onto the plane... *wink*

Thanks for reading.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2019 5:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 2

Michael sure knows how to play innocent and lie through his teeth, both at the same time. 

Thank goodness David answered Vic's phone call.  Michael is not going to get away with the shit he pulled. Glad David cut the jeans Michael was going to try and impress Brian by wearing something too tight. I hope he over medicated himself too.

David knows now that he did it. How is he going to be able to be remain seemingly unknowing for the remainder of the flight is beyond me.



Author's Response:

It's interesting you mentioning Michael playing innocent... I think he has spent his whole life perfecting that trait.

Yes, David's got his suspicions, but that is what they are... but what will he do? Just how bad does he want Michael?

Thank you so much for reading,

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2019 3:11 am Title: CHAPTER 2

Now we find out if David will do the right thing



Author's Response:

Hmm, what will David do? That's a big question. Just how bad does he want Michael?

Thanks so much for reading,

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 10:47 pm Title: CHAPTER 2

Great chapter.  Dislike Michael so much.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I kind of dislike the guy, too.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 9:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 2

I'm sure that David doesn't want to believe that Mikey was capible of doing such a thing.



Author's Response:

 No, you are right, but the evidence is kind of inconceivable, don't you think? Hmm, what will David do?

Thank you for reading!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2019 8:08 pm Title: CHAPTER 2

Oh this is good! David may be an asshole, but he's good at his job and he is clever too. He already thinks that Michael didn't fall. Then, the police found the blood and the bat. How long will Michael hold on to his lie?



Author's Response:

And your back! I hope you are enjoying it. Poor Mikey is all drugged up with not a care in the world. I do see a rude awakening for him, though. Advil just may not cut it!

Thanks for reading.

HUGS  ~Cathy

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