Reviews For The Last Dance
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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2019 10:03 am Title: CHAPTER 3

It's great to have some insight of what could have happened in the ER waiting room. So glad that Vic is reminding Jennifer and Debbie that they pushed Justin to go to the prom.

Debbie will have a big surprise when she will learn who the homophobic asshole who hurt Justin is. Based on David's reaction, it could be very soon. Furthermore, Justin being awake and remembering, the heat will become difficult to bear on Michael' s side.



Author's Response:

The fact that Justin is asking why Michael was there... well, right now they think it's confusion (shouldn't it be Brian?) ... but hmm, Mikey is on his way home... and, oh, yes! Surprises await...

Thanks for reading,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2019 11:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 3

Michael certainly is becoming more beligerant as time goes on and he isn't even accused of anything. Acting like he's hiding something. Hmm, wonder why.?

Bravo David. Finally found that backbone to stand up to that little weasel. I wouldn't even buy a ticket back to Pittsburgh for him.

Ahh Daphne, always has Justin's back. And now Brian's. Kind of put Jennifer in her place, Vic did too.

Chomping at the bit to read what happens next. Who's going to believe Justin asking why Michael was there. They'll probably tell him he was seeing things. Vic will know. David will know. Will Brian?



Author's Response:

A person really has to wonder about widdle Mikey, don't they? He should have kept his mouth shut. As far as purchasing the ticket... I'd want him as far away from me as possible. Yes, David sure has his suspicions, although that's all they are at this point... but we'll have to see what happens when he hits Pittsburgh.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2019 12:22 am Title: CHAPTER 3

Great chapter.  Give Mikey enough rope and he always hangs himself  Love how the story is going.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Ah, yes. Mikey, Mikey... he should have kept his mouth shut!

Thank you for your continued support. It means so much to me.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 9:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 3

Wow.  I'm glad Jen finally saw sense and how Daphne stood up for Brian.  David is turning into a pretty good guy.  I know Michael is in pain but he's not acting in a way that isn't suspicious.



Author's Response:

Hey, Phyllis! Yeah, David wised up... thank heavens. But, I do have to wonder if Michael is just in too much pain to care... besides, you know how he always feels everybody should cater to him. 

It should be a fun flight home!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 5:02 pm Title: CHAPTER 3

Great chapter. I'm glad that David is wising up and sending Michael home. Although, part of me wishes he was going to take him there personally, I understand his need to be away from the whiny idiot as soon as possible. If it were me, I would have been plotting a hundred and one ways to push Michael into oncoming traffic while making it look like an accident. However, I think Michael being summarily dismissed as a nonentity, and being shown in a way that he's not David's endgame is a really good move. Somehow, I hope those particular medical records/ x-rays find their way to the Pitts P.D. when- not if, but when- Michael gets arrested. Could he possibly be detained by the FAA for causing such a horrific scene on the return flight to Pittsburgh? Hmm... just saying, LOL

Looking forward to more!

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

It's always fun reading a review from you... Not sure about the FAA-hmm... anyway... however will Mikey manage on the ride home?

Thanks for reading.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 9:09 am Title: CHAPTER 3

Obviously David knows Michael is the villain so why isn’t he offering up that information ?



Author's Response:

I had to think for a little bit before trying to figure the best way to answer you. I guess I could say, David is offering up Michael to the wolves... he has to go back to Pittsburgh with a very bad RIGHT knee and a split lip... and let's not forget Justin woke up wondering why Michael was at the Prom. It shouldn't take much for the pieces to fall into place. But let's see what type of lie Michael might try to spin first.

Thanks so much for continuing to read. I hope you enjoy what else I have planned.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 6:39 am Title: CHAPTER 3

That's not fucking fair!!!! You can't leave us hanging like that!!! Please update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey, Lori... It's half-written. The bumbling idiot has to take that plane ride by himself! hehe!

Thanks for reading, hon,

HUGS  ~Cathy

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