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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2021 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 10

More kleenex was needed for this one. Though, actually, as Brian was taking his trip down memory lane with the album, I didn't think Joan was all that bad. She actually supported him, stuck up for him with Jack and saved things along the way. But either way, for however, bad she was, I'm just glad that she and Brian were able to turn things around later on. They both deserved that!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 10

Beautiful new part in the Sunshine files!

This picture of Brian and his mother shows how well the casting has been done. There is something between them. Remembering this awful yet powerful scene, it's great to see them with smiles on their faces. It could illustrate one of their last meetings when they were so well together.

Thank you for revisiting Brian's life with its ups and downs and some naps.



Author's Response: LOL Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

I love the part where Bree was a baby; Brian admitting he was terrified is quite surprising.

Their napping must be missing some regenerative effect.



Author's Response: I think most parents are worried with the first baby.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2019 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 8

The part with Gus is difficult because Brian has to explain why he was this way at that time, but not anymore.

It's amazing the relationship between the brothers. John is a strong man and he feels Brian's needs for "support". It's great to her them having fun.



Author's Response: This is an attempt to clear the air. Brian needs support.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ethan's period, then Stockwell: that was a rough time for Brian and Justin. Too bad it's giving Gus a bad feeling.



Author's Response: It isn't easy to talk about, but it will be good to have it all known.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 6

Interesting to read how Brian started his adult life and how difficult it was to find a good job. He used what the librarian told him and it paid.

Too bad regarding Leo; its feels like the end of an era.



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed reading how Brian got started.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

It's funny how Gus gets defensive about Lindsay.



Author's Response: She is his mother.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

Haaaaaaaaaaaa, Patrick! Glad that Justin dared asking that question, but didn't reveal his secret.

I guess Lindsay wasn't in the picture yet.



Author's Response: Sounds like you enjoyed this part. lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

The first chapter is so Brian!

The moving must have been hard on Brian, because he lost his safe haven and amazing source of knowledge and acceptance.



Author's Response: Moving is always hard on children, but especially for Brian in his situation.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

At least, bowling was an activity Brian could practise with Jack, without Claire and Joan. I don't see why Jack would find bowling more manly than soccer; maybe because he was bad at it.

This is really hard on Brian, but Gus needs to understand what happened.



Author's Response: Anything Jack didn't like wasn't manly.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

So glad to see a new part of this amazing saga!

It's a great idea to try explaining what might have happened during Brian's childhood.

Claire was such a nasty kid: it's one thing to ignore someone, but hurting her brother was just awful, with the obvious result: Brian wailing and disturbing the "peace" at home.

At least, Joan loved him at first.



Author's Response: Brian did not have an easy time of it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 2:40 am Title: Chapter 2

Maybe I got it wrong but I though Mikey always said they became friend when they were 14.  But the bowling story it looks like they are 9.



Author's Response: Okay, maybe we're wrong.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 2:36 am Title: Chapter 10

Another year comes to an end and a new one begins.



Author's Response: As always.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 12:10 am Title: Chapter 9

Gotta say that Bree reads Ben very well.



Author's Response: Bree's a very intuitive little girl.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

Mentions of where this story started with pics make things perfect.  Love all the pics you found to enhance this story.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

Poor Gus.  He really has nothing to worry about.  The good thing about Brian and Justin is that they talk.  No keeping secrets.



Author's Response: You've got that right.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 6

I've always wondered just how Jack met Joanie.  So Brian used his line of "I can change that" with Ryder before he used it on Justin!



Author's Response: LOL Perhaps so.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 1:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

No wonder Mikey held on to his dream of being with Brian so long.  He didn't see what Brian needed for what it was.



Author's Response: Explains a bit.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

Nice bits from the Brian and Mikey Show.  I'm not sure Brian needed Mikey as much as Mikey needed Brian.



Author's Response: Isn't that often the way it is?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2019 11:45 am Title: Chapter 3

Always liked reading about Brian and the Library.



Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2019 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 2

Some memories are good.  That bowling ball looks heavy for a nine year old.  It's odd if this is a memory connected to Mikey's because Mikey always says that they've been best friends since they were 14. 



Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2019 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

A comprehensive look at Brian's life.  Glad Gus is there to learn.



Author's Response: Yes, there's a lot to learn.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 2:01 am Title: Chapter 10

Absolutely wonderful.  Great story and all the pictures added to it.  Of course, you know I think your writing is beyong amazing.  Take care.



Author's Response: Such lovely comments. Thanks again.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2019 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 4

Finally getting back to reading.  Even for us readers RL wants to get in the way. Now that I have the time, storms are coming again so I will probably close up the computer.  Of course, you know I love the Sunshine Files and this story is perfect in letting us see all that was never said in the series.  Knowing the real Brian is wonderful.  Fantastic writing.  Hope you are both doing ok.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. This family has become very real for us.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 04, 2019 9:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back.  Hope the break was good for you.  What a wonderful first chapter.  It is the beginning of the Kinney Operating Manual !!  Fantastic writing as always and you know these stories make me so happy.  Will read more later as I am going out for the 4th.  Hope you have a nice 4th, also.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, and we're happy you're happy. Hope your Fourth was good.

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