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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2019 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 6

It's "funny" how Lindsay is so WASP in her behaviour while Justin just goes with the flow of Brian's not so discreet solicitations.

It's great to see how Lindsey and Brian are playful.

I love how Brian's BS detector found out the actual reason for Gus' refusal to go brunching.

I love how you created this atmosphere that feels like real-life.



Author's Response:

No teenage boy would ever claim to hate desserts, right? ;) LOL We're so happy to hear that the story feels like real life! What a great compliment -- thank you! - TI

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2019 12:32 am Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  Love thinking what Gus would be like as a teenager.  So much Brian, but that little bit of Linds would make him so interesting.  Terrific writing. Hope you had a nice holiday.



Author's Response:

Yes, we think it's so fun to imagine which parts of himself he would have inherited from each parent...and also what traits might he have picked up from Mel and Justin as well. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! - TI

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2019 12:21 am Title: Chapter 6

Brian understands Gus better than Lindsay. So just how do they solve the problem of the reservation?



Author's Response:

The conclusion to the reservation conundrum has now been posted! ;) - TI

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