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Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2019 8:22 am Title: Chapter 2

Well you go fast! Nice to see Michael under control.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2019 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Things were moving so fast I thought the story was over.

Who does Michael think he is telling Brian he owes him? For what? Brian protecting him from the bullies at school? Making sure Michael passes enough to graduate? Whay an idiot. If anything. It would be Deb and Vic Brian would be indebted to. But they aren't like that.

Yay Brian is moving in with Justin and Mikey doesn't have free access any longer.

Kinnetik is going to do well with all the important people onboard.

Mikey met a nice guy who came into the comic book store? RUN BEN RUN!!!! , and don't look back.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2019 12:01 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow,  Just love this story and I really like how you move it along rather than long overly detailed chapter.  Wonderful, fantastic writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2019 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 2

I am surprised and pleased that they manage to get Mikey under control.  Especially after what he said at the beginning of the story.  This is great.

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