Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2019 3:12 am Title: Chapter 4

I love the tenderness and love that comes across the page as you describe the two of them making love.  Michael is a good friend and I hope Brian figures out what is wrong soon.  As much as I hate the buildup, I do love a good story.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I really enjoy writing the physical components of their relationship, as well as portraying Brian as a sexual being even though he has a spinal cord injury. So glad your'e still enjoying the story! Lots of buildup and complication in this one as Brian looks back at everything he feels he should have seen.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2019 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 4

Such a turnmoil must be painful; hot then cold, Justin is perfecting the mood swings.

How will Brian be able to ever speak his fears to Justin? It's quite impossible to talk about something that isn't visible anymore. Justin might dismiss Brian's concerns as fast as he can.

Author's Response:

There is a lot of chaos in Justin's brain right now, and they both have a lot of fears that aren't being shared, but talking about them won't be simple...