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Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2020 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Ha ha, now I'm even worse off! Be careful what you wish for - it might just be another cliff hanger lol.



Author's Response:

Truth! 😉 TAG

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2020 6:17 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

I for one won't complain if you make it 3 chapters in 3 days lol - I'm waiting on tenterhooks here!



Author's Response:

Hmmm. Well, maybe... 😉 TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2019 1:48 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

I'm happy to read any story your muse tells you to write! 

Interesting start to this one!



Author's Response:

Awwww! Thank you. Hope you enjoy it! TAG

Reviewer: Sksfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2019 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

I love the start of this story. Can’t wqit to read more. You are a terrific writer

Author's Response:

Thank you. That was just the boost I needed this afternoon. Now, off to finish Chapter 2. 😊 TAG

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2019 8:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Interesting beginning. Justin who can read people! I can not wait to see what he's going to read from Michael and Lindsay. But first he must read Brian's body since his mind is barricaded. I love that!



Author's Response:

I always figured Justin was a bit empathic - this story will just enhance those abilities. But there's a fun plot added in as well to spice things up. Happy Reading! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Intriguing beginning! This new quality suits Justin just fine.

Justin can't read Brian's mind, but I'm pretty sure he will read his body very thoroughly, deep into the night :)

I love this reverse "And that’s when it happened; when HE came along."!



Author's Response:

I used this line about 'reading Brian's body' in the second chapter. Thanks for the suggestion. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 2:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Looking forward to seeing where you take us.  Also learning how he reads Mikey and Lindsay.



Author's Response:

That's what a story-teller does - takes you all sorts of crazy places. Hang on, here we go! TAG

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:38 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Intresting plot. Love it.

Justin being an empath suits him cause Justin is the only one who helped everyone without taking any credits. That's why Brian can't resist attraction towards Sunshine beauty & kindness.

I'm sooo onto this new one. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I agree that Justin was the only choice for who my Empath would be. Let's see where it takes us... TAG

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 2:20 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Love the twist of Justin by being an empath. Going to serve him well. Especially dealing with Brian's whiney best friend. He'll have to prepare himself when the barrier Brian's heart is hiding behind starts to crack. A life time of pain, sorrow, loneliness, plus new found love are going to come at him all at once.

I can't wait.



Author's Response:

Justin being an empath might be a curse as well as a boon (foreshadowing there...) But I think you're right about what will happen if Justin ever does penetrate Brian's shields... Happy Reading. TAG

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 2:10 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Ooh... I've been trying to think what your additional tag of kidnapping could mean... then looking at your banner... Oh no... I'm afraid it will be Gus!

HUGS ~Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm afraid you might be right... TAG

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2019 1:48 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Blankness

Oh, WOW! I really liked this... I'm really looking forward to Brian introducing him to the gang... can you imagine all the different readings he will get?

And you totally gave a new meaning to: And that's when HE came along!

I'm really looking forward to more of this!

HUGS ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you liked my reuse of that line - when he came along - I had fun with that. Off to play with all those 'readings'. TAG

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