Date: Feb 09, 2020 3:40 am Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
I was waiting until this was finished before starting it. So far, so good. Interesting premise- Justin reading Brian or not reading him as the case may be. He was always on to him in canon, so it should be very interesting how he handles the man he can't read in this story.
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm excited to hear what you think. But it will be quite different having a Justin that CAN'T read Brian at all. Happy Reading! TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2019 11:49 am Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
Hmm I am very interested in this AU it is very intriguing
Author's Response:
Thanks. Hope I can keep you interested as we go along. TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2019 2:05 am Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
Interesting to include Claire in the scenes at the hospital. I'm already suspicious!
And I can understand why, as an empath, Justin would move on after being rebuffed by Brian after their night together. But could it be that Brian somehow knows Justin is an empath? And that was a bigger motivation for Brian to cut Justin off?
Can't wait to see where this goes next!
Author's Response:
Stop reading ahead in my brain! Lolz. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2019 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
I bet Brian gets sorry that he let Justin slip through his fingers. Especially if Mikey keeps reminding him how lucky he is that Justin is no longer around.
Author's Response:
You might be onto something there with Brian being sorry he let Justin go . . . *wink* TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2019 7:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
So the canon is finished. I can not wait to see where you take us next! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
All the places I want to take you . . . That's the best part of writing! Enjoy! TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2019 3:48 am Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
I really like this feature that allows Justin to read people!
The 2 moments are the key to the next parts I guess, Claire being the potential opening to a few turnmoils in Brian's mind?
Author's Response:
You might just be right, but I'm not going to give away any more clues for now. You'll just have to keep reading. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2019 1:10 am Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
Okay, you derailed a little, but I can totally understand why.
But, what I'm wondering with Brian... is he scared of the connection with the blond, or can he sense something that he can't put his finger on, thus, warning him to keep his distance.
I'm really looking forward to how you set everything else up. How long before Justin has to come back into the picture, how he's brought into the picture, how is Justin contacted, and who's responsible for Justin having to come back into the picture.
I was a little disappointed thinking Michael's jealous animosity might come forth more, or Lindsay's swooning when Brian held the baby. And unfortunately, we didn't get any meeting at the diner. I would have loved Emmett's and Ted's thoughts on the blond. Hmm, maybe being an empath wouldn't be such a great thing to be.
Great, great, story.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
I think both is true for Brian. He's scared of being emotionally open and maybe senses that Justin threatens his nice, neat, close little world. For all the rest, you'll just have to keep reading and see. *wink* TAG
Date: Aug 25, 2019 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Face Of God
Wow. Justin didn't need to be an empathy to know what the feelings were in Lindsay's room. All the emotions there for anyone to see.
Brian was running scared. Almost like he knew Justin was looking for something Brian definitely did not want him to find.
Justin may have given up for now, but he'll get to Brian one way or another.
Author's Response:
My Brian isn't that different from canon Brian - he was always running away from his feelings. Only now, this Justin can sense that more distinctly. Off to write more. Enjoy! TAG