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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2019 7:07 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

Is Justin being blocked from being too close to Brian? Just a thought I had.  Anyways...

I loved the Pink Panther reference. at least you didn't use Detective Drebin.

which was only up to mid-January - you ALWAYS manage to get the comedy thrown in in stressful situations. Too bad Brian didn't have Justin's stats typed in.

Well, we KNOW Vic is innocent, but if Brian is going to list clients and tricks, you would CERTAINLY think he'd list his own family. I mean, who hates him more? But, I did like how Kip's name was thrown in there, too.

As far as sex, I'd rather have drama and plot, with a little sex thrown in. You will get there, I have no fear. hehe

Sorry about your RL lately, and whenever you can get around to your NaNoWriMo story, we will all reap the benefits.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2019 12:53 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

I go away for a week... and I have TWO chapters waiting for me when I get back! I should go away more often, LOL! Hopefully, your RL Adulting will calm down soon.

I still think the bad guy is a bad gal. And Brian didn't list any family members on his spreadsheet. Hmmm...

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2019 10:59 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

thanks for update

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2019 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

I assumed it was Mikey having those thoughts all along,  However, after this chapter and knowing how sneaky you are, I think he may be a red herring!  Which really doesn't leave anyone.  Hmmm, will have to think more on this!

Thanks

Deb L

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2019 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

Great idea to compare the lists; the one from Brian with the tricks was hilarious. They have a least 2 potential culprits; that's a good start for the cops. Will Brian be OK to let Carl know about Michael?

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2019 8:58 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

Everything seems to blame Michael. Justin has good visions. Let's wait to see where you will take us.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2019 4:43 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

Great chapter.  Michael seems too obvious,but usually that is the one person who ends up guilty.. You are good at keeping us guessing so we will wait it out. And, eventually they will end up in bed.  It is inevitable.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2019 1:56 am Title: Chapter 9 - Process of Elimination.

Hasssss to ne Mikey !

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