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Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2019 5:32 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

This close. God, atleast Brian knew now not to take Justin visions lightly. Fantastic writing & Chapter. ❤

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2019 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

This is just awesome. Update soon please. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2019 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

Craig's an ass... a dictator... I AM FATHER... YE SHALL OBEY! Are we surprised?
So much is going on. Brian and Justin are really connected. Whether it's from the sexual bond they shared... I'm not sure. I can't see Brian being an empath... because it sounds like this is the first time he's having these images... and it was only AFTER the deep sexual bond. It's good for him to know Justin is on the up and up... but my gosh... what an awful thing to be witness to.

Justin might have to break his grounding imprisonment, and sneak out of his window.

It ALMOST sounds like maybe Joan could be in on the kidnapping. Giving the kid whiskey... it worked for her... High maintenance. Just like your damned father... perverted. Hmm... Jack drank whiskey... and Brian grew up with it being his drink of choice.

Then the Priest said all he'd seen was his usual parishioners coming in for confession... hmm...

The note was on Copy Paper? Where would they get the use of that? IF Claire is involved... would she have access to a computer and printer at the hospital? Or if Mikey is involved... he definitely would.

I wonder just how far off we are... Questions... questions... questions.

Take care... I definitely know how life can play havoc... so I hope things get settled for you soon. Thanks for finding a little time and giving us an update.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2019 2:04 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

Always great to see an update!

I was pretty sure I had the kidnapper figured out... but now I'm thinking that maybe there might be TWO relatives involved.

Not really sure about the B/J connection here... but from Justin's observations about Brian's emotions in the church, I'm guessing Brian is himself an empath, who has over the years suppressed that part of himself. But like Justin wants to know is, why?

Hope your RL settles down soon... and not just because I'm a shameless & greedy Fic reader, LOL! 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

thanks for update

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 10:32 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

Good update. I hope soon that Justin's field of vision will expand to see who is with Gus. Give whiskey to a baby! Joan must be there somewhere.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 6:34 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

One step forward on Brian's side, but a few steps backward for Justin. Craig will be watching like a hawk.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 3:14 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

There has got to be some way to identify the kidnappers.  They now know there is more than one.  But who?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 2:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - He Was Right Here

Wonderful update.  I am totally baffled by who it is this time.  Great suspense.  Fantastic writing as always.  Will keep you in my thoughts and prayers that things go well for you.  Hang in there.

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