Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2020 1:52 pm Title: Chapter 14 - No Son Of Mine

Great update.  Can see the story moving along.  It is wonderful.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2020 8:00 am Title: Chapter 14 - No Son Of Mine

I'm actually VERY surprised Brian didn't do more to stop Justin getting in Craig's car. He intervened when Craig was squeezing Justin's arm, yet when Craig was belittling him and telling him 'house rules', calling him names, Brian stood aside, saying nothing, allowing Justin to go that home. If Craig implored verbal abuse in front of everyone... what's he going to be like in the privacy of their home? Nope, I don't buy Brian willingly letting him go with a man showing those abusive tendencies. Brian knows all too well, how fathers that demand 'respect' and how their word is law in their home, are!

Now the 'vision' of little Gus again... Did Brian see it too? All we can hope is that he did, and come racing up to take Justin out of that house, and into his own home, so they can work together to save Gus.

Either that, or will Justin defy everything, and leave on his own?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

The difference between this story and the series is that here Brian and Justin didn't have several weeks/months of a building relationship before the confrontation with Craig. Here, they each went their separate ways after that first night. So Brian isn't quite as invested in protecting Justin yet... expect that to change soon, tho. 😉 TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2020 3:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - No Son Of Mine

I love these little late night surprise postings! 

I also love your very vivid description of a hungover Brian, LOL!

Somehow, I don't think anything Craig says will keep Justin from helping Brian or Gus!

 

Author's Response:

Surprise! 😉 TAG