Date: Jan 16, 2020 2:16 am Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
Another great chapter! I always did love a bratty, snarky Justin.
But perhaps my favorite line was in the notes...
*Inspired author dancing away to write more!*
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2020 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
Justin is a cheeky monkey and now, he has both Hobbs and his father against him, as well as Hobbs' croonies.
As for the sketchpad, I hope that there is one of the hoodie Justin saw previously and that it will give Brian a hint. I also hope that he will sue Caig for slander about the pedophile thing or at least threaten him to do so. Pittsburgh might not be a great place to try getting justice on such grounds in 2001.
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2020 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
I saw the title: Brian’s Coming To Get Me... and I was HOPING that Justin had had enough of bigoted Craig, had come downstairs with his bags packed, and upon asking where he was going, said, "Brian’s coming to get me." ... Oh, well... a girl can hope. It was a good scenario for the title, don't you think?
So, the Hobbs fiasco took place again, but this time on school grounds. Maybe that will work for Justin's advantage. The entire school body will be aware of it, hopefully, this will provide Justin with a modicum of protection. The few cronies can't take on the entire school. The teachers will know now, too.
How does Craig know Justin slept with Brian last fall? And, anyways, isn't the age of consent 16? And does Craig really want that info making its way through the country club and church?
I'm glad Brian ended up with the sketchpad... can we hope that Brian might recognize something in one of the sketches? A place, an object?
So, Craig has a business meeting tonight. Taylor Electronics business... or the business of getting down and dirty with a young female? (I'm evil... I know.) Maybe Justin can discover the truth, and have something to give the screws to ole dad.
I'm glad the author is inspired, because we need those fingers to type out a quick resolution to Gus' predicament.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 14, 2020 8:42 am Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
They have to find Gus. More please!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2020 7:06 am Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
Hurry, we need to find Gus!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2020 12:53 am Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
Dance all you want. This was great. Wow, that Craig is so disgusting. The plot is thickening and it is wonderful. Fantastic writing as always.
Date: Jan 13, 2020 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
Omg this story makes me so anxious poor Gus
Author's Response:
Then I must be doing my job as an author right! (Sorry) TAG
Date: Jan 13, 2020 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Brian’s Coming To Get Me
I'm picturing this scene in my mind. I'd like to see fuming Craig fighting with Brian for the sketchbook. I love the chapter and as always wait patiently for another one.