Date: Feb 09, 2020 2:12 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
OK... you're were only supremely evil for a short time, LOL!
Loved Michael's retelling of the phone call with Brian... this line was a perfect little snapshot of the Brian and Mikey show.
So I say ‘yes, asshole, I’m listening’, because if I didn’t call him an ‘asshole’ he would’ve known how scared I was.”
Author's Response:
Supremely Evil - that makes me so proud! Bwahahaha! TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2020 5:03 pm Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
Great news. I am waiting for this story for a while right now. Had to hold myself back not to read before the happy ending comes. :-) Seems like my torture will end soon. THANK YPU! (And now hurry up pleasse and finish). *hugs*
Author's Response:
Happy reading! TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2020 11:49 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
Well, in my opinion, Claire deserved being punched. I'm glad that Justin and Brian were both recued, but where is baby Gus?
Author's Response:
I agree. I only wish Brian hadn't collapsed before punching Joan too... TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2020 8:20 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
Another chapter or not, I already got that one done in my mind.
It was a wonderful story, I had guessed that it was a combo. of
Claire and Michael, but definitely Claire.
I wonder what happened to Craig? But then again, is it really
important?
I just wanted to say hi and let you know how much I enjoyed this
story – a lot, very much, terrific. So thank you, thank you, thank you.
DavidR
Author's Response:
Thank you, David. I love hearing from you and knowing you're still reading my stories after all these years. I guess I wasn't as tricky on this one as I thought I was being though, if so many of you guessed it was Claire. Or, was that just really effective foreshadowing? Yeah, let's call it that. LOL. Thanks for reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2020 7:45 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
Thank you for the quick update and relieving us! As we now know they both will be OK, even if they won't be able to prove that to each other any time soon, I can't wait to read what will happen to Chris and Craig, when Jennifer will realize why Justin was all alone in front of the school.
Author's Response:
I couldn't leave you on that cliff for too long . . . Plus, when I get to this point in a story, I get so excited to write that I really can't help it. I just keep writing and writing and writing. Who needs to sleep anyways? TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2020 3:17 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
i can't wait to see what Craig's reaction will be and if he gets any comeuppance, and Jennifer for that matter, since she seems more worried about what people will think than that her son nearly got killed! Stupid tart!
Look forward to the wrap up!
Deb L
Author's Response:
You know I'm not gonna let Craig off scot-free, right . . . hehehehe! (I'll be posting the final chapter tomorrow. I'm so excited to see what everyone will think!) TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2020 2:32 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
Ok thank you for this chapter! I logged on and thought is that the chapter I read last night or is it a NEW ONE! Yay it was. No apologies for hitting Claire totally understandable reaction to the violence already perpetrated against him!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Glad you liked it. I was really worried that folks would be very upset about that punch, but so far nobody's seemed to mind... TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2020 2:09 am Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
Wow, great chapter. Fantastic writing as always.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. What a ride, huh? Thanks for your behind the scenes support on this one! TAG
Date: Feb 07, 2020 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
thanks for update. Jennifer is such an ass.
to bad Brian did not punch joan too
Author's Response:
To my mind, Jennifer is just a weak woman, but she does eventually stand up to her horrible husband... Give her time. TAG
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2020 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 22 - I’ll Be Fine
I, too, am NOT an advocate of hitting a woman, but this cracked me up. Claire SO deserved the punch in the face. Not only did she shoot Brian, so he's going to a SCAR on his perfect, flawless body, but she was kidnapping his son for the second time, AND taking his money. I wish he had the energy to hit old mommy dearest too. She deserved a punch too. The bitches. When it sinks in about the scar, she just might get a second punch to the face. I wonder if they will try to fight it... LOL.. but as Horvath said, It doesn’t get better than that as far as direct evidence of criminality is concerned.
I'm surprised in Brian's state, that he didn't drop Gus as he fell to the ground.
So, who pulled the fire alarm, and just how did the two of them know Brian had a son that lived with Lindsay and Melanie?
Maybe for the boys' remaining stay in the hospital, they can share a room. Being close, they might recuperate faster.
Jennifer never questioned what Justin was STILL doing at the school that late, and the fact that she was disbelieving of Hobbs' involvement, if I were Justin, I'd have told her to go hell, and to get out of my room. She sounded like she didn't believe Justin. Not that fine upstanding country club boy Hobbs... he wouldn't do that.
Horvath never said what Hobbs and company are facing either. I would think if Justin knew they would get stiff punishment, he might feel better.
Looking forward to how you wrap it all up.
HUGS ~Cathy