[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 12:19 am Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
Wonderful update. Love that Justin has gotten Brian to allow him to help. Fantastic writing as always.
Date: Oct 07, 2019 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
Well, just as I expected... this was a nice reward for getting up and going to work this morning.
I won't say much else... except I think the perpetrator is a "she" not a "he."
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
"He’s with me" reminds me of "I'm going with him" that Justin said to Michael after the hospital scene in S1E1.
Great update! Justin is back to the loft and could spend some more time with Brian as support / friend, despite what Mel thinks.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2019 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 7 - He's With Me
Surely Brian knows who among his acquantices needs the big buck?
Date: Oct 07, 2019 11:43 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
Still say it's Michael. He must have said something to Brian about not wanting to be a father and pissed Brian off so badly Brian refuses to talk to or see him.
Glad Justin stood up to Hobb's bullying.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2019 9:04 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Already late But One way or another it was going to happen. Hope Brian better listen to Justin. There are clues in those thoughts Justin heard of culprits (maybe their more than 2 people). You written fantastic.
I like Daphne knows it. She understand & supported Justin, as Michel never did to Brian.
Thankyou for update. kudos. :)
Date: Sep 24, 2019 7:26 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Omg Tag I was shouting at the chapter to Justin shut up and go and tell Brian! And when he does Gus is already gone 😔
Date: Sep 24, 2019 12:42 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
OK, so I think I've narrowed down my own list of suspects.
I really love that Justin can so completely trust Daphne... we all need friends like that!
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Okay... heart-stopping chapter. Do you want guesses on who we think the kidnapper is? Well, even if you don't... I have to talk...
My first question is: Were you trying to throw us off the path by continually referring to the kidnapper as 'he' 'him'?
Because... this time all he saw was a darkened room, a beat up kitchen table covered with piles of paperwork and bills, and a highball tumbler sitting next to a bottle of cranberry juice and a box of cheap white wine ... the scene in his head showed hands throwing a pile of bills across the table. ‘I’m fucking drowning here while HE wastes more money in one night than I earn in a week. And what’s worse, that brat of his gets treated like a damned prince while he ignores the rest of us. Maybe if the brat wasn’t around, he’d be a little looser with his cash...
This is telling me CLAIRE! But then you have DINER scenes... unless Michael is helping Claire... because I don't see Claire sitting in the diner with all those 'sinners'.
You are weaving quite the tale here. I'm thoroughly hooked. Mysteries... I LOVE MYSTERIES!!! BRAVO! TEN STARS! (Should be a hundred!)
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Sep 23, 2019 8:55 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Good cliffhanger.
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 3:52 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Drums' roll!!! I have one name in my head: Michael, who isn't getting much attention since Gus is born.
Author's Response:
I love listening to everyone’s guesses... TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 3:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
Love this chapter. More clues and a chance to save Gus!
Author's Response:
I love doling our clues like this. It’s so fun for me as a writer... TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2019 2:06 am Title: Chapter 6 - I Think It’s Real
WONDERFUL WORDS FROM THE MASTER !!!!!! Absolutely fantastic.
Author's Response:
Awww! Thank you! Keep on writing! TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2019 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
Ahh, sorry, I'm not NEARLY as confused as I was in the last chapter. This kind of cleared up that confusion. But, shortly before Daphne pointed out that Justin was seeing through someone else's eyes, that thought entered my mind.
I have two people in mind for who Justin is channeling. And I think it's because he has a connection with Brian that he's seeing Gus and feeling the hostility.
Brian noticing him, and asking, “What are YOU doing here?” makes me go back to what I have commented on a couple of times already... I think on some level Brian's aware of Justin's emphatic ability and it's why no matter what Justin tried, Brian ignored him at every turn.
I see you have a new banner. I, personally, like the other one better. One reason is that this one depicts a twenty-two-year-old Justin instead of seventeen, and a five-year-old Gus, instead of a baby.
Looking forward to more.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2019 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
Yep, confused would be the best adjective!
Date: Sep 11, 2019 9:03 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
Yes confused very confused chapter very successful.
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2019 3:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
Nope it's not Brian. I think I know who and why but I don't want to spoil the fun.
Author's Response:
You don't think Brian hates and wants to kill Gus? Really? LOL... TAG
Date: Sep 11, 2019 1:48 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
OK, so I had originally posted my thoughts on what the hell was going on... but after some thought, I figured it was probably better to keep my guesses to myself... so as not to ruin anything in the off-chance I was correct. Much more fun to let the wonderful words reveal their secrets in due time.
So very happy to see the update though! Don't know if I can be as patient waiting for the next installment, LOL!
[Report This]Date: Sep 11, 2019 1:19 am Title: Chapter 5 - Really Confused.
Totally confused, but starting to get some ideas I will keep to myself. I have to see how I do. As usual, Tag, the writing is amazing. I don't know how you do it, but, you do it well.
[Report This]Date: Aug 31, 2019 1:16 am Title: Chapter 4 - Out Of The Ordinary
Hi Tag. Just started reading this. I love it when you try something completely different. I can see this is going to be a quite mysterious story, with a touch of otherworldliness about it and, maybe, a whiff of conspiracy. Excellent!
I know what you mean, trying to *write* dreams must be very difficult, but I'm sure with your talent you can pull it off! (no pun intended).
As for synonyms, I kind of like nebulous or indistinct myself. Or maybe that's just my personality. LOL
Thanks
Deb L
(amorphous is also a good one)
Author's Response:
Ooooo - such delicious adjectives. I'm so excited to use them... LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2019 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Out Of The Ordinary
You're doing a great job with the dream seqences. Then you have the feelings if hatred first Mikey's directed at Gus. Then Claire's directed at Brian. Yeah, the mystery does deepen.
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2019 1:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Out Of The Ordinary
You're doing a great job with the dream seqences. Then you have the feelings if hatred first Mikey's directed at Gus. Then Claire's directed at Brian. Yeah, the mystery does deepen.
Date: Aug 30, 2019 8:15 am Title: Chapter 4 - Out Of The Ordinary
Justin will go crazy with all his dreams. Who is the baby? Is he dreaming of Brian's life before they meet? Many mysteries in this story, it's good even if I go crazy too! Thanks for the update.
Date: Aug 30, 2019 2:24 am Title: Chapter 4 - Out Of The Ordinary
OK, so now I'm completely confused about the baby! If it is Gus, why would there be so much evilness surrounding him?
I don't blame Justin for being knocked a bit off balance by Brian's intense gaaze in church!
Date: Aug 30, 2019 2:00 am Title: Chapter 4 - Out Of The Ordinary
Is Justin having visioñs a la Mysterious Marilyn? A soothsayer? Why so many "daydreams" then? Does he have powers that are letting themselves become known now that he's getting older?
When he dreamt of Brian holding the baby, that was Gus and they were all at Debbie's. Could it be a glimpse of the future? The baby he feels animosity towards, it seems he's channelling Michael and all of Michael's jealousy towards Gus. We all know Michael doesn't like anyone take Brian's attention away from him.
Boy, Justin really has his hands full.