[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2019 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
How sweet of Emmett to help out. Vic also helped in his own way. At least for a little while the boys are normal.
Author's Response:
Emmett is a gem - you just have to love him :)
Normalcy is important, even in light of the bad things to come.
Date: Oct 28, 2019 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hi again! I can only agree with you and Gale Harold regarding Brian’s further development. But the end of the series unfortunately left us with a different impression. As if everything would go on or start all over again. The presence of Justin alone would have made a different impression for me - but I think I've already written that. Makes me still so sad!
Yeah, our sunshine must have a special brain… After all, he had achieved what nobody did before… And Brian had no chance and just had to fall head over heels, madly and deeply… :-)
I think if you aren’t working in this field or have ever had to deal with it, you don’t necessarily know that the motor tracks cross in the brain stem and maybe the writers of qaf thought it would make people more confused. But funny, that you also noticed.
So, now to this chapter. as always, so well written. You always achieve, that one can participate so much in the feelings of the actors. One can feel their desperation, their hope, their pain. I have to say - with his ongoing bloody cough that I have little hope that it will be anything good, but I really hope it’s still curable. And I’m curious, what's about M?
When you mentioned that Brian had been to the cemetery I already thought about his father but I really love that you made him come across Vic’s grave. I really liked Vic in the show and I always love stories in which Vic plays a more important role to either Brian or Justin. In my opinion, he could have had a more important role in the show.
So, have a wonderful week! Until next time, warmest regards!
Author's Response:
Yeah, let's not get started on the ending of the show. Those writers liked to have Brian stay the same and not have him grow up which is just not realistic. People grow and change over time and you can't give us five seasons of Brian growing up and changing only to then say in the last episode: Oh, by the way, he will always stay the same.
It doesn't work like that. At least for me :(
I am not saying I was a great fan of the wedding storyline, because that felt a bit too much and too sudden at the time, but I loved the "I love you" after the Babylon bombing. As for the wedding storyline, some of my feelings about that will actually come into play in this story and will be picked up later on and discussed here *spoiler alert*
Haha, I always assumed everyone knew the brain worked like that. I learned that in science class in school. But maybe I am just a nerd for actually remembering after all this time what I learned in school ;)
We'll find out what's wrong with Brian in the next chapter and then we'll also find out more about what will happen with M and how M will be affected by whatever is wrong with Brian :(
I totally agree about Vic. I loved the quiet, supportive way in which he loved the boys, unlike Debbie's loud ways. And he never needed to remind anyone of all the things he had done for them to validate himself. In that respect he was so different to Debbie and Michael which is why I always liked him. I felt like they didn't use him as much as they could have and was very sad when they killed him off on the show :(
Thanks for your comment :) More will be up tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2019 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 10
Waaaaaa! So sad but good.
Author's Response:
I am sorry about the sad part, but I hope it will be worth it in the end ;)
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon! :)
Date: Oct 27, 2019 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
thanks for update
Author's Response:
You are welcome :)
More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2019 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great update. Wonderful writing. I am running out of tissues again.
Author's Response:
Oh no :( I am sorry about the tissues. You know, I secretly work in the tissue industry and this is all a plot, so they can make more money ;)
I have to admit that there will be more emotional chapters coming up... It's not over yet.
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2019 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
Nice touch the part with Vic; Vic knew his place in Brian's heart and didn't need to hear it. He wasn't reminding Brian how much he owned him, contrary to Debbie.
Author's Response:
I always liked Vic and liked the quiet, supportive way in which he loved the people around him. He didn't love them in the loud way Debbie does, yet he loved them all the same and probably helped some of them even more by just being a great example of how to deal with bad things in life and how to be a gay man in a world that doesn't like you being gay.
I loved Vic and he left way too soon :(
More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2019 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Vic always shows up when he's needed the most. Especially after his death.
Author's Response:
Vic was always a good one, a shining light of hope for all of them. He left way too soon :(
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2019 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hi,
Just wanted to say, as you know, I love your stories and love that you have continued this series. However, I am not in a good place mentally at the moment, so I may or may not continue reading this, or possibly read it all at the end.
I don't want to read anything possibly depressing so this and a couple of other WIPs may have to be skipped for a while.
I just wanted to let you know that, if you don't receive reviews from me for a while, it's not that I don't appreciate your superb writing and storytelling.
Thanks again,
Deb L.
Author's Response:
I am sorry to hear about your own personal situation, but I totally understand. Real life can be hard enough as it is, so we don't need our fiction to bring us down as well. Don't worry, I absolutely understand and hope that you'll feel better again soon :-*
I know there's probably not much that I can do, but if there is, please let me know :)
- Jessica