Date: Jan 01, 2020 10:29 am Title: Chapter 18
Hi again! When I read the first few lines, I thought there would be complications ... Fortunately, I was wrong. They really have gone through so much already and suffered enough. And the next few weeks won't be any easier ...
Thanks for another chapter which is very well written and so sensitive. I really love that you always describe situations in such great detail. For example how Brian wakes up, his thoughts, feelings ... Or this scene with Gus and Luke when they visit Brian for the first time after surgery... They're both cute in their own ways. I just love that Gus is asking for M. And the way you describe Luke's fears of all the machines and also his fear to hurt Brian, and Brian's reaction, the way he calms Luke so caringly, is just amazing. One just want to hug and cuddle Luke!
Warmest regards and a happy and wonderful new year!
Author's Response:
I know I am evil, but I wouldn't be that evil. They have already suffered enough and sadly the next few weeks won't be any easier what with the chemo starting soon... We can only hope that better times will be ahead for them.
I love that scene with Gus and Luke. Both of them dealing in their own way with their daddy's condition and poor Luke being so scared and intimidated by it all. You just want to give them both a good, long hug.
Thanks for your comment and happy new year to you, too :)
Date: Dec 24, 2019 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
Beautifully written. So tender and emotional. Well do e😊
Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I am glad you liked it!
More will be up soon :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2019 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wonderful chapter. Fantastic writing. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you.
Author's Response:
Awww, thank you :)
I am glad that you liked it.
I hope you had lovely holidays :)
More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2019 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 18
Very emotional chapter! Poor Luke: it must be terrifying to see all these machines; Brian had a good idea to explain why they were here.
Merry Christmas to you as well!
Author's Response:
Yes, poor Luke indeed. Poor guy was so intimidated and scared by it all. Hopefully he'll be doing better on his next visit, now that he knows that his daddy is okay.
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :)
I hope you had lovely holidays!
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2019 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. Nice to see that the surgery went well.
Author's Response:
Finally some good news :)
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon!