Date: Jan 12, 2020 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 20
Hi again! Sorry, this time just a short review. I‘ve been pretty busy these last days. A very emotional chapter ... I can understand both so well. Brian who wants to hear the full truth about M and Justin who worries about everyone anyway and wants to spare Brian a little. But it's good that he finally tells Brian the full truth even if it‘s painful. So Brian may be a little prepared for what he‘ll see. although I think it will still shock him totally.
While writing this I just noticed! M has no name yet! I'm curious about what you or they‘ll choose...
A wonderful written chapter! Thanks very much for sharing this story! Warmest regards!
Author's Response:
Yes, both points of views are understandable and it was only a matter of time before they would clash. Thankfully they were able to work it out between themselves pretty quickly...
We'll see what it will be like when Brian sees the baby for the first time, though it might not happen as soon as people would expect *hides*
No, M has no name yet. With her being born that early and the last few weeks having been all about figuring out what to do and Brian's health, there hasn't been much time yet for Brian and Justin to think of a name. But don't worry, she won't be without a name for long. We'll find out soon ;)
More will be up soon! Thanks for your comment :) And hopefully you'll have a less busy week next week :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2020 12:13 am Title: Chapter 20
Wow, that was a tough one to read. I can imagine it was also tough to write. But it was so true to their characters. Wonderful writing. I will have to invest in a tissue company before this story ends.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was very tough to write. Despite what my stories might show and be about, I like them best when they are together and happy. Scenes in which they are fighting or apart or suffering, break my own heart and are very challenging for me, because all I want is for them to make up :(
I just felt that Justin would try to protect Brian from the worst details, knowing how fragile his mental state already is and Brian, knowing Justin as well as he does, would immediately see through it and would hate that details were being kept from him. It felt like a very natural scene for those two, but that didn't make it easier to write :(
So my masterplan to support tissue companies is working ;) Go me!
More will be up soon :) Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2020 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 20
Brian thinking that Justin was lying wasn't good. But the truth was the truth. Brian's going to be okay and the baby will be okay once they give her her name.
Author's Response:
Well, to be fair Justin was keeping the details from Brian to protect him... Brian knows Justin very well to immediately realise he wasn't telling him the whole truth :(
If only it was as easy as finding a name for her and then everything would be alright... But yeah, she'll get her name very soon which will be an important first step forward :)
More will be up soon!