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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2020 11:02 am Title: Chapter 31

Ohhh, I don't know what to say. It's perfect! When I started reading this chapter and they mentioned a surprise, I was a little disappointed that it was the zoo and not the hospital (although it was good to see that they had a great time a the zoo - they deserved this), but then the second surprise came! And it couldn't have been a better one! And Gus is a really great big brother. That he takes himself back and lets Luke hold Vicky first. They're such a beautiful little family!



Author's Response:

I know what you mean about being disappointed that it wasn't the hospital as the first surprise, but I felt that it was very important for them to spend time with just Luke and Gus on their own, especially after that talk that Gus and Justin had a couple of chapters back. The boys missed out on a lot of quality time with their fathers and I felt like it was really important for Brian and Justin to show the boys in their own way that they are important too and matter as well :)

And of course the brothers also got to meet their baby sister - long overdue :)

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2020 5:08 am Title: Chapter 31

I bet she doesn't cry for Gus since he looks so much like Brian.  Love that they went to the zoo first.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2020 12:12 am Title: Chapter 31

What a fantastic chapter.  So glad they are doing well.  Praying that there are no more setbacks for Brian or Vicky.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it. Finally some good news all around :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2020 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 31

Beautiful moment with Gus as the big protecting brother. He was also very nice to let Luke hold her sister first. Great family. Knowing Brian's treatments are finished, life will start resuming its normal way.



Author's Response:

Yay, finally some good news all around :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon!

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