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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2020 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 32

Hi again! I don't know which moments I like most. I think it doesn't really matter. You describe them all so beautifully, no matter if it's between Brian and Justin, Brian or Justin with Gus or one of them with Luke. And although it's another situation I can only agree with Brian... I would also like to have a little bit more normality right now. These times are crazy and I often thought hej, could I please just wake up from this nightmare. I think that's something Brian or Justin might have also thought in their situation. Great writing!



Author's Response:

I think we can all agree with Brian right now. I'd love some more normality right now as well... Until you lose it, you never realise how much it means to you :)

I am glad you like these moments, because quite honestly. they are my favourite bits and pieces to write. I just love these gentle, loving moments between all of them...

Thanks for the comment :)

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2020 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 32

Hi,

I really what you have done in this story. I feel really bad for Brian and the family. I was so happy when he got pregnant with his second child with Justin. I'm so glad that Justin got to experince being there for Brian this time. I'm still sad that Justin can't have any children. I love the relationship the boys have with Brian and Justin. I love how Gus was with Justin anyd that he can  draw like Justin. I love Luke he is cute and attached to his daddy. I hope that Brian gets better. I hope Michael and Linsay don't come back to cause trouble. I hope they don't find out he has Cancer. I hope gets the all clear with doctors. Please post more soon!!



Author's Response:

I am glad that you like the story :)

I love how the relationships between everyone in the family have developed from the previous stories. They are a unit now and there is a lot of love. Brian and Justin have grown so much and were ready to try for another baby, Gus and Luke who are each so attached to their fathers and love them so much, Brian and Justin who love their boys so much and now there is also Vicky to love. No, it wasn't all perfect, especially with Brian getting sick like that, but in the end, I am sure they will be fine :)

As for Michael and Lindsey... Hmmm.... My lips are sealed ;) 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 32

What a wonderful chapter.  Little by little, we see things starting to be normal.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

Yes, we're finally getting back to what could be considered normal. It will still take some time, but we're getting there :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon! 

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 32

thanks for update



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You are welcome :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 32

It may take a while, but things are slowly getting back to normal.



Author's Response:

Yes, they are. Finally :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 32

Such a traumatic time for everyone in this family all for different reasons. But they have two things in common 1) they have all been terrified and are still scared about Brian's illness 2) however they all love so fiercely and that includes Vicky now.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, and I felt it was really important to show the different sides of how everyone is suffering from each family member's perspective. We've seen Brian's fear, Justin's fear and exhaustion and it was important to also see how Gus and Luke were doing and feeling and how they feel about their little sister. 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 32

Another beautiful moment between father and son! What is great with kids is that they say what they think/feel without filters. Brian needed to hear what Luke was feeling.

Luke's question about Brian's hair was very interesting as for him, hair means normalcy, not health as adults might think.



Author's Response:

After Gus and Justin had their moment, I felt like Luke and Brian deserved one as well. I am glad you liked it :)

I love children and how unfiltered they are. I adore their honesty and it's too bad that once they grow up they forget about it. We could learn so much from children!

Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :)

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