[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2019 2:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Finally got caught up on reading and RL. I usually don't start a new story until it is complete since I have over 50 WIPS. But, I love your writing and wanted to get started on this story since I know you will never leave it a WIP. Wonderful writing. If you celebrate, Happy Thanksgiving.
Date: Nov 16, 2019 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael handed Brian a drink....did he spike that drink? Surprised no one said anything about that! Brian didn't remember the night....oh my. At first I thought he assumed they slept together, because naked and all. But now I'm wondering. Check footage if it goes that far back. Did Michael give Brian the date rape drug? I wonder if this is what truly happened... Excellent as always!
Date: Sep 27, 2019 1:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Really love this story! I had a little problem in the first chapter figuring out what was going on, but now I’m hooked!
Date: Sep 18, 2019 12:46 am Title: Chapter 1
So many secrets and lies. Lindsay off in lala land, Michael as hateful and spitefully as always. So he finally got what he wanted from Brian. Where did it get him? Mel doesn't seem to have changed much. Why am I not surprised?
Brian playing too many emotional games with people and their lives, Gus seems to be following blindly in his footsteps. Think it's a good thing Ian is in the picture.
And Justin, don't get me started on him. Michael hates me and treats me like shit but I can't tell Brian it will upset him. Way wah wah. Even if it resulted in the same way he should have stood up for himself and spoke his mind. Well at least it seems that he's raising Patrick alone and with Brian's help.
I don't blame Patrick for not wanting anything to do with Gus. Gus hurt Justin, for whatever reason, why should Patrick forgive him so easily?
[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2019 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
This is something completely different. Can't wait to see what you have planned for everyone.
Date: Sep 17, 2019 7:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I can not wait to see what happens next. This beginning is full of questions. I was scared of who Ian was but no it's not the same! Happy you are back and knowing that you do not give up your other stories.
Date: Sep 16, 2019 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
There WIP are killing me. 😡 I really love this idea but I may just put this on my bookshelf until it’s finished.
Please hurry. I’m hooked
Date: Sep 16, 2019 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really compelling story idea. I always wait anxiously for your updates - thank you for sharing it with us!
Date: Sep 16, 2019 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this has a real twisted centre I am really interested to see where this goes
Date: Sep 16, 2019 1:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow this has a real twisted centre I am really interested to see where this goes
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2019 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Imagine waking up to this! What a treat! So glad to see you back!
Not sure where to start here, but as soon as I knew Lindsay was having a baby, I figured that was Justin's 'son'. I do hope there is something in writing that will forbid either Sam or Lindsay from ever trying to take him away from Justin.
I can't figure out why Mel should be mad at Justin for siding with Lindsay, because why should Mel want a crazy person around her kids? But the fact she hid Patrick's paternity from Gus... and the fact that she was pro, 'Brian and Mikey' speaks of desperation. What a bitch!
And Michael! All I can say is, WOW! A new level of spiteful and hatefulness! I'm going to presume he couldn't wait and went running to Justin about how Brian slept with him! I am interested in knowing how Emmett and Ted handled that. Did they think it was betrayal too? Did they side with Mel and Michael and feel Brian and Michael should be together?
Am I right in assuming that's the reason Ben left him? It's also interesting he lost everything. The house was probably in Ben's name... but what happened to the comic shop? And where does Hunter figure into everything?
I was a little confused though... it sounded like Brian did something stupid (what?) that had him and Justin having problems... and that's when the pain management started... and it was THEN Brian slept with Michael? So, in reality, they had two things to deal with.
And Brian moving Michael into the house... Britin?... that's just all kinds of wrong! But, if it helped to permanently destroy the friendship... okay. I'd like to know where Michael is now... now that they aren't in contact anymore. Is Mel aware Michael wanted to take Jenny away from her? She might not have been so pro Michael after that? Poor Jenny! How has she survived all this trauma?
Patrick must be 14 or 15. So, how long have Brian and Justin been together as a couple? It was funny learning they were together after Gus' proclamation of how Brian pushes every man away since Justin. And Gus saying it was going to cause problems... if it has been kept secret THIS long... why should anyone find out now, just because Gus and Ian know? (Ian - really?) I was ALMOST afraid momentarily.
I guess I have lots of questions, but that's true with the beginning of any new story. I'm sure we will find out everything in due time.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2019 9:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start to this new story. Looks like plenty of intrigue to come. I am glad you are going to finish your other stories too, as I like heart & soul and wicked games very much.
Glad you got your mojo back!!
Ta
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2019 6:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Another great beginning, although the thought of Brian and Michael in a bed is pretty disturbing. The only excuse I see is that Brian was drunk.
It will be interesting to read how he managed that part with Justin.
It's very sad what happened to Lindsay and Gus. Is Patrick living with Justin and is he the "son" everybody thinks he has?
I'm surprised, in a very good way, by Debbie's reaction towards Justin.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2019 5:09 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so intriguing, StarBaby! I can't wait to see where you take this. I'm already ready to flay Mel and her minion, Michael alive. I'm almost scared to find out how Jenny developed into an adult with the two of those idiots as parents if we see her. Without some kind of calming influence with SENSE around, I can't imagine it's all that good.
Anyway, looking forward to MORE of this story!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2019 3:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is some tale and totally believable. Lindsay went bonkers and it seems like Mikey is too. I'll be looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2019 1:53 am Title: Chapter 1
So glad that you are okay and that you were able to find your muse. This story is off to a great start. Looking forward to reading this and your other WIPs. Ironically, I am rereading Choices for about the 10th time. Love all your stories. Thank you for sharing your vision with me.