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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2019 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 11

I do not feel sorry for Lindsey, she always was a lier

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 10:32 am Title: Chapter 11

I just wanna say, that when Patrick said something about the football coach, I had my fingers crossed that it was Drew. Thank you for not disappointing me.

But, is this following canon time... so, what? Emmett and Drew have been apart fourteen years or so?

David shouldn't have ignored the nurse at reception... besides... I find it extremely funny that the only reason he thought the guy wanted to talk to him was to flirt. AH... You're an Old Man, David... you should appreciate it if someone wants to flirt. See... forewarned is forearmed.

I say, smirking at the money he would have to pay to get rid of me... the ass wasn't even sorry for what he said or did. Not once did he apologize. Kudos goes to Thomas for being able to throw that in his face. David has spent so much on his 'boy toy' and his whims... I have a feeling he doesn't have a lot saved. And apparently, his kid isn't the next coming of Christ, either. Ut-oh... there went Melanie's bank too. I doubt David can ever get a job again. Mikey might have to join that street corner gang.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 4:27 am Title: Chapter 11

Just love this story. Keeps getting better with every chapter.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 11

Poor David! His pedestal is crumbling down and nothing will stop his downfall.

Major steps for Lindsay: back to her art and acknowledging her son. She is on the right path and with the help of her family, she will recover.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 1:36 pm Title: Chapter 11

Wendy is slowly coming back and this time she'll have help.  David is about to lose it all and will have to start all over again.  Mikey has lost, but when will he realize it and who will he blame?

Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2019 10:17 am Title: Chapter 11

It's good that Lindsay is trying to get out of her fog where Mel has locked her up.

Patrick and Taylor are cute together and take their time.

I can not wait to see what David will do if he loses everything and Michael will only whine.

David and Justin wow David can dream Justin does not need someone who wants to control him. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2019 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 11

Lindsay is finding her was out of Wonderland and she is slowly seeing that yeah the real world may be a scary place but t can be a wonderful place too with good people who defeat the bad.

Mel may have broken Lindsay's spirit but she didn't douse the fire inside her that is fighting through the fog of mental abuse to find her Brand New Path.

Drew and Emmett are ready to walk the path of life together instead of apart no longer will they let fear and doubt get in the way...Good For Them!

Patrick and Taylor are Cute and besides Taylor Taylor-Kinney sounds Adorable!! And is Quite a Tongue Twister lol

Thomas is more than a pretty face and he just showed David that Henry didn't settle for a toy but a man who enjoys hiding his light under a bushel to see the truth behind others words.

Compared to Thomas Michael isn't even good enough for the kids table and Michael is nothing more but a whiny, self-indulgent baby who still hasn't matured past twelve.

Michael thinks he is still fourteen waiting for Brian to come finish that long forgotten hand-job but he is actually twelve living in his comic book world before Brian came into his life.

David took a brat and tried to make him into a man that to others Michael is best he could do in a good day.

David lost this battle because it wasn't with Brian who didn't care about Michael beyond friendship but with Michael who would never become a prince no matter how many shopping trips or expensive vacations you gave him.

Besides Just would never be with David he already had a father who tried to control his life and force him to hide his Very Bright Light, no way would just settle for living in David's mediocre shadow when he stood side by side with Brian and casted quite a light himself.

Henry donating money to any charity Deb chooses shows that he will not fall for pretty words again and that he is the last person David should ever think to cross.

The House of Cards Is Shaking Hard!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2019 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 11

We want more of Michael sinking into shitness!! Um begging and soon will stage a riot!

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