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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 12

Give it up, Mikey. Even if you had the money... Brian wouldn't have graced the hotel and restaurant table with his presence. YOU CAN'T COMPETE WITH JUSTIN!!! You are so far down the totem pole, it isn't even funny! Pretending him and Brian were Johnny and Baby... *I think I just vomited in my mouth* WHERE'S THE BRAIN BLEACH! Ha-ha, Mikey... you have a hundred bucks to your name, and I bet you lose your fancy jeep!

BTW... was David ever able to culture Michael, so at the dinner parties, he didn't hold his fork like a moron?

Mel can TRY to convince a judge... but reports from Ben, Gus, Jenny, Justin... the list goes on. What Mel did to those kids, lied to them about Lindsay, and what she did as a lawyer... should speak volumes about her character, and the fact she shouldn't be a parent... at least until she gets help. AND... do you know how HARD you have to SLAP someone to knock them down and leave a bruise? That borders on abuse!

I'm extremely happy for Emmett and Ted. It sounds like their lives were on hold long enough.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 8:34 am Title: Chapter 12

In Reality, Jenny is Unfortunate having Mel & Michel as parents, like living curse as seen Michel dime on everyone expense. I Would love to kick his petulant face, as even with Ben, Michel never really change.

 

 

Glad Brian & Justin are away from it. Justin is beautifully caring person. He once said "He could never take sides." He loves them equally. Love Sunshine. ♥ ThankYou for the update. :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 1:47 am Title: Chapter 12

So stealing from David was supposed to have Brian think Mikey was better then Justin?  How stupid can one person be.

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:53 am Title: Chapter 12

Loving this story!! Rolling on the floor laughing at Michael thinking he could get something over the good ole Dr Dave....LOL

Can't wait for the next update, great writing as always!!

Liz

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:03 am Title: Chapter 12

Lindsay is finally ready to leave Wonderland she is starting anew with a clean slate and reinventing Lindsay Peterson, the past and the pain will always be there but she is learning to not run from it but face it head on while also coming out stronger in the other side.

Brian, Justin and Ian would be smart to just make sure Mel doesn't try to see Lindsay cause Lindsay is no ready to face Me just yet, that will take more time Mel did a lot damage and Lindsay can't face her right now.

Mel Hit Jenny and Deb Didn't Beat Her Down?!?!?!!!

Mel is losing all her power but she isn't losing the ability to blame others for her continuous screw ups this may have been the first time she hit Jenny but it wouldn't have been the last since Jenny is fighting back and challenging all her plans to stay in control.I

I always thought Deb was wrong to slap Brian she screwed up her relationship with Vic and Brian's reaction while inappropriate was a son grieving for the only true father he ever knew. (Always hated that scene and it was one of many of how others treated Brian while later running to him to solve their problems),

Jenny remembers Ben as someone who loved her unconditionally while Mel and Michael either used her or forgot about her entirely.

Patrick is quite a water stole surprised Brian entered the competition which sounds fun and would've had Michael screaming in anguish.

Michael shouldn't try to be clever his one brain cell is qualified to perform that function it is barely keeping Michael's head from caving in due to lack of oxygen,so Michael forked himself while trying to one up David who has left him to sink by himself in the mud.

I guess that means Hank left too?

Very Interesting Chapter!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 12

It's very good news that Lindsay decided to leave Neverland.

As for Jenny, she's not out of the woods yet, but with what Carl witnessed, Mel doesn't stand a fat chance, even with a good lawyer.

Michael's plan is exploding to his face and David could always work in another state, starting from scratch.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2019 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

I know i sound like a broken record, but really we want more of Michael the little shit. Emmet and Teddy and the rest nice and all, but nothing ever tops Whiny Mikey getting his ass handed to him or throwing a bitchy tantrum or being lambasted by someone/anyone!

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