Date: Oct 20, 2019 7:40 am Title: Chapter 13
Your writing is so engaging I really feel I am part of this family and all the slings and arrows feel so real
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 11:33 am Title: Chapter 13
Mel, Mel, Mel... Has she so easily forgotten that nobody stays clean during a custody battle? And, at her own omittance, she remembers Gabriel... so she should remember the lengths Gabriel will go to for Gus. Mel is NOT a squeaky-clean person, and Harry will be furious when all these truths come out in court. He will be made to look like a fool in a court of law. But, Harry must have a copy of the video of Michael's little rant at the diner. But, Mel should also realize you can't squeeze blood out of a turnip. So, how she expects back pay, when Michael made sure the well dried up, is beyond me.
Can I just say that Cowlip seriously screwed up with Honeybun and Lambskin? I shudder every time I hear those names. And what must Brian have thought when his son was being called the same thing his Trojans were probably made out of? I'm surprised Jenny still allows him to call her that at her age.
And touche to Jenny for pointing out Michael's obvious lack of caring. He didn't even sound upset... or ask how she was... just worked Brian into the conversation. When Hank came in at the end, I found that enlightening. The poor kid has had a tough life. Maybe he should look up some of those family members of Jenny's and Hunter's. I don't think they will be so quick to judge, and possibly offer to help. It's also nice to know I was on the right track regarding David keeping up with Brian and Justin's life. But then we got Michael's delusions again!
After Gus gets Jenny, he should have Mel's parental rights taken away regarding himself. I know he's twenty-one, but that would seriously remove her from his life. It should stop her from interfering.
How is it, David could owe lots of money... and not being concerned with paying for what he owes? And renting a cottage at the country club should run through his money fairly quickly. Because, I have a feeling it will be a LOOONNNGGG time before he works in his profession again.
That had to have slain Brian to know what Mel did to Jenny. I'm going back to the court hearing - Mel will be crucified.
YAY! A wedding in Vermont! I hope Michael gets photos in the mail of the happy couple exchanging vows.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2019 12:24 am Title: Chapter 13
Now Mel as a lawyer knows lying to your lawyer is a Big No No and get she was stupid enough to do it so I hope she enjoys the consequences.l
What Video?
Michael is more disturbed than Lindsay beca because even with the proof in front of him he only sees that Brian is waiting for him.
Moron Says Huh?
Hank should leave all the losers behind and forge his own path where he succeeds because of and without them.
He should talk to Brian and Justin he probably has some juicy details about his grandfather, David and Michael that could help in Gus and Ian's court case??
Brian and Justin are getting Married in Vermont!
They are going to cause an avalanche with the heat they are going to generate lol
Jennifer is going to destroy David and hopefully his Daddy too.
What stupid is Michael going to do now?
The Taylor-Kinneys Are Full Of Love!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2019 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Looks like everyone is happy except for Mel, David and Michael. Can't wait for the wedding and Mikey's head popping open.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2019 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
An EXCELLENT chapter! I love the way the way the family is rallying to help Gus save Jenny from the idiocy of her parents. And Vermont is an absolutely PERFECT wedding venue for Brian and Justin!
Harry is going to be in for a rude awakening concerning Melanie when her lies of omission comes to the forefront. What's funny is that she really believes all of that mess in Canada is going to stay somewhat hidden if Gus takes her to court. She should know from personal experience, that while Gabriel might play fair, NO ONE stays squeaky clean in court.
As for Hank... I don't know how to feel about him, but I will be honest and say that I'm a bit torn because of how David and his grandfather have treated him in the past. It kind of puts a different perspective on his brattiness, and penchant for trouble. He really needs to find a way to make his life better in spite of living down to his father's expectations. And then when he makes good, I would love for David and his father to feel what it's like to be left behind by Hank. Perhaps the young man should talk to Hunter about how to make a parent regret their actions. Hunter is everything Michael and David never thought he would be. It would be a nice twist to making Michael go 'Linda Blair' LOL
And speaking of Dumb the First: What can I say except that Michael is once again setting himself up to be completely humiliated by living in his delusions. DUMBASS! I laughed out loud at Hank's assessment of Michael's brain capacity. Alone that drivel Michael spouted about writing the comic is grounds for having his ass permanently checked into a mental hospital. But then to actually continue to think that Brian is with Justin for charity, and that has any chance of even being considered a friend at this point... Star, please just have the fool jump from any bridge immediately. Perhaps as his bones are breaking due to hitting the water from that high up, his brain will actually begin to function correctly. Because right now, it's just painful to watch someone breathing constant stupidity.
Well, I'm off to torment him in one of my stories now. And apparently that goes for me, too, since I can't stop his screech and whine of 'Hey' in my psyche. I'm sooooooo looking forward to your next chapter.
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2019 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
Jenny has definitely some bad days to come, but I bet the family will find a solution to get her out of her parents' grip.