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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2019 2:34 am Title: Chapter 20

Made it to the end of these chapters.  Love this story.  Can't wait to see where it goes next.  Looking forward to the wedding.  Fantastic writing. 

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2019 2:03 am Title: Chapter 20

Hey Star,

Still absolutely loving this, you are my fave!

Hope when this is finished you have plans to finish Wicked Games too, pretty please (Michael whiiinnne)!

Luv & hugs,

Deb L.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2019 7:28 am Title: Chapter 20

That was true what Brian said... if you don't conform to Mel's wishes and thinking... you're not worth her time. She's about to have to deal with the fallout of living that way.

Michae, Michael... what can I say? WOW! He actually thinks he can convince Dr. Banes there is nothing wrong with him. Thanks for the laugh. He's so lazy and money-hungry... doesn't he realize you NEVER sign anything without reading it?

I was wondering if he received money from David, if David would be through with him... which you answered... and Michael is now responsible for paying everything... medical and support. It would be interesting to know just how much money he gets... institutions are going to eat a VERY large portion of that. Is the support amount set on that? They told him not to blow it on toys... if he's institutionalized, how can he buy toys? If Ted is overseeing it... can't Ted be assigned to making Michael's payments to Mel (or the support) and the hospital? Because if it falls on Michael's shoulders, he won't pay them. And if he doesn't pay support, his rights can be revoked.

Does Michael get one lump sum from David, or monthly payments?

But, I guess all my questions are moot... because when he gets released... he will run to Brian... thus voiding everything, the money reverting back to David, and Ted handling anyway. But if Michael runs out of money... does it revert back on David to pay doctors and support?

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2019 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 20

thanks for update

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2019 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 20

Michael is so stupid but that will play in protecting Jenny from him along with Brian and Justin cause we all know Michael is going to contact Brian and Justin then he will be out in the cold where he rightfully belongs.

Jenny needs to get know that her value isn't as pawn to be used for others selfish reasons but that she is a blessing to be cherished for just being here.

Michael sees Jenny and His as another way to Brian while Mel sees Jenny and His as her weapons to hurt Brian and everyone else who don't agree to her demands especially when she is wrong but refuses to admit to it.

Gus and Ian will be good for Jenny cause they will give her the Love and Discipline she needs to be the woman she wants to be not puppet Mel demand she be.

Thanks For the Update 😃

If you celebrate Happy Thanksgiving🍗

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2019 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 20

I love the way Brian explains about his walls and Justin's impact on his life.

Michael is as stupid as ever, signing without reading, then expecting to get money upfront!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2019 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 20

Loving how Michael has once again shot himself in the foot.  Also the good news that it looks like Jenny will be staying with Gus and Ian.  It will be interesting to watch Jenny and Patrick being they are sort of siblings.

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