[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2019 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 15
It's great to read that Ben is making his way back to the family.
Surprising visit to Justin: I love how he puts his visitor in his place and dares speaking his mind.
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2019 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 15
Lucas Cameron better be serious about making amends to Hank or he will regret it and I hope he is serious about letting David fend for himself in the bed he made with Michael.
Mel should just give up and let Jenny have the chance to be free of the burden Mel and Michael heaped on her by not getting them what they want, Mel had a baby for all the wrong reasons just like Michael wanted to play Daddy for all the wrong reasons, now it is time for Jenny to be happy with Gus and Ian who love her for being her not their cash cow or a link to Brian.
Michael isn't stupid but he is idiotic if he thinks that this plan will work but it will be fun watching it play out as he loses more than he thinks.
Patrick is so easy to like that he makes anyone feel comfortable and worthy of being in his life because like his dads he doesn't crave attention for himself he would rather the spotlight was on someone more deserving, Ben shouldn't blame himself for not seeing what was happening to Lindsay he had his own problems to deal with and everyone missed how controlling Mel could be when she doesn't get her way.
Lindsay having a good day be talking to Patrick, Gus and Brian she even laughed the way she used too.
Three Blind Mice are about to have their tails cut off 😆
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2019 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 15
AMAZING chapter, StarBaby! If I write everything I'm feeling about it at this moment, I'll be here all day. So I'll just list the highlights from each scene and speak briefly about them.
- The family dinner scene was absolutely wonderful. From Ben's reluctance to get out of the car, all the way through to the conversation about Michael, was long overdue. Patrick really is a testament to Brian and Justin's parenting skills. I really enjoy how 'normal' his interactions with everyone is.
- Michael is the absolute DUMBEST imbecile alive! And Melanie isn't much better. When I'm with Brian...' I say let him keep playing FOOL to try to catch up to WISE. It's going to be great fun watching them both lose everything. Mel should just hand over custody now. And who knows, they might even be willing to pay her to fuck off so that she doesn't have a reason to ever darken their doorstep again. Ordinarily, I would never agree to something like that, but it seems a reasonable solution to the constant problem of money-hungry Mel since that's all she wants anyway in keeping custody of Jenny.
- The visit to Lindsay was such a feel-good scene. I'm glad that she was having one of her good days, and seemed genuinely interested in Patrick's life. Her breakthroughs are definitely amazing and encouraging to behold.
- Justin's interaction with Lucas was PRICELESS! First, Deb set the metaphorical fire to his ass, and then Justin extinguished it by not giving him an inch! I won't deny that I sat here cheering for Justin. The nerve of Lucas to think that WASP intimidation would work on Justin. He was born, bred and baptized in it; Lucas should have known better to even try. But all that aside, I'm glad that he's FINALLY ready to grow and change in the way he interacts with Hank. I'm also happy that he's ready to let David reap what he's sown when he married Mikey of the Man-child variety. Perhaps an old dog can indeed learn a new trick- one that David and Michael are in no way ready for- while rediscovering life outside of the WASP nest.
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS, ~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2019 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
Love this. Lindsay sounds normal and Justin put Cameron Senior in his place. Things are going good, just not for Melanie and Michael. I have to lol thinking of Mikey acting like he's crazy in an attempt to get Brian's attention. Brian is not stupid and has learned how to read Mikey.
Date: Oct 23, 2019 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 14
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[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2019 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 14
Amazing chapter!!!
Gabriel and David: I love how Gabriel managed to treat David like he is not above the average.
Harry and Mel: she knew she shouldn't have lied, even by omission; too bad she just did that and more. Harry served her with an honest truth that she will need some time to digest, if she ever does.
Jenny seems to be on the right way to get what she needs.
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 14
Sweet! Having fun time reading it.
Michel doing this charade, will loose him Jenny for good. Is his daughter just a play toy for him. I like this Deb not falling for Michel Bulshitts*.
As Brian said they have a wedding to prepare for. He will show Michel that Justin was Always More important for Brian.
Mel should had already came clean but Harry took a wise step. Good for him. Thankyou for the update. Hugs, 🙂
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yes they should use Michael thinking he is reliving his past to prove he is unfit to be around Jenny he is stupid enough to play crazy let's just make him that way instead and with enough people to witness it perhaps Michael will enjoy a stay in the hospital for a time?
Jenny is seeing that Mel and Michael aren't worth her time anymore so she isn't going to expound the energy it takes to get them to think beyond themselves, instead she will use her time to help Gus and Ian find a permanent home that will make them all happy and while also finding herself again.
David going after Hunter is stupid but then again he was stupid enough to marry Michael and add him to his accounts so obviously he makes Michael look semi smart.
His pathetic jealousy of Brian has cost him a lot but hurting Jenny and Hunter will cost him more because Jennifer will not stand back and let any member of her family be tarnished by the likes of David and his Daddy, they don't know power until they come up against one pissed off Jennifer she will make them go fetal and wish they had never heard of The Country Club Sect.
Hank came to Deb to warn Jenny and is helping Brian and Justin in the process while also saving himself, with time, patience, love and understanding he will show his dad and grandfather that they where wrong about everything and that is isn't blood that taints you sometimes it is the family you are born into.
Hank like Brian will show them that he is twice the man they will ever be and that family isn't blood but the ones who help guide you when you fall and love you when you aren't perfect 24/7.
Mel lying to get lawyer was stupid but what will make her more stupid is walking into that courtroom with just Michael by her side is an idiot but a lawyer who defends themselves will always have a fool for a client.
So that means it won't be hard to prove to a judge where Jenny truly belongs because all they have is mud to sling while Gus and Ian will have the truth on their side.
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 10:34 am Title: Chapter 14
Love this chapter. Mikey play acting and not being believed. Poor Brian having to go along with it. David finding out he isn't as hot as he thinks he is. Hank actually listening to Deb and getting help. Jenny telling her mother what she thinks of her and her manipulations that aren't working not even on her lawyer who isn't her lawyer. Good job.
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 9:00 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh and all I can say in reference to Mel's meeting with Harry is BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Not only did Jenny let the bitch have it, but Harry did TOO! Serves her right!
Okay, it's 5 am, time for a little nap because I have an appointment at 8. I swear these bouts with insomnia lately have me reeling BUT having this to read definitely made it bearable!
HUGS,
Me again!
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2019 8:55 am Title: Chapter 14
Spectacular chapter!!!! First, let me just start off by saying- or more accurately, CUSSING- that Michael needed to be SMACKED SO HARD that he was physically sitting at the right hand of the Devil. That little mother ! And then he had the nerve to....LAWD HAM TURKEY I could have chewed bullets and shot every single one of them into the crack of his ass! Hopefully, whatever plan the family comes up with will be to Jenny's good, while getting that sorry excuse for a sack of bones out of their lives for good! That Dirty Mother-Shut-Yo-Mouth needs to piss off the RIGHT person so he can be outfitted for some cement boots! For real!
Anyway, moving on before I start sounding like I'm cussing on network tv again: I LOVED Jenny's talk with Gus and Ian. I appreciated how honest and open with her regarding Lindsay's condition and the resulting breakthrough. I believe that after being repeatedly lied to, and systematically emotionally abused by her so-called parents, she needed to be gifted with ALL of the information, even if some of it was theorized. At least, it all got her to thinking and being able to see the truth versus the fiction Mel and Michael had been spouting to her all her life. I also think that knowing Lindsay remembers her will go a long way in restoring Jenny's self-worth.
Next was the conversation between David and Gabriel... BRAVO, Baby! That was one helluva encounter and one I don't think David will forget anytime soon! First, his arrogance in thinking to discredit Hunter and the backpeddling, trying to come off as a concerned parent made me want to reach through the screen and snatch his larnyx out. I outright nodded my head and laughed in Gabriel's assessment of Sir Sanctimonious Snakeskin, as he picked apart David's true motives for not wanting Hunter and Jenny around. But I actually cheered aloud when Gabriel put the big PIN in the metaphorical revenge balloon David had been blowing. I'm so glad that Jennifer and the family had the forethought to hire him on Hunter's behalf. There's no doubt that David is desperate on so many levels that he would use anyone in his goal of self-preservation. Too bad for him that he didn't employ that same theory when he married his trophy. I would feel sorry for David but... Nah! My feelings just aren't set up that way! He deserves everything he gets- and that will ultimately be taken away- simply because he's a first-rate DUMBASS!
The situation with Hank actually broke my heart for so many reasons. His cries and pleas for attention has resulted in addiction, and yet his grandfather... WHOO CHILD! If that man were a RL person instead of a fictional character, I would have marched myself over there to smack him blind! It's no wonder Hank has always been angry; look at what he's had to endure at the hands of so-called family! Hopefully, Blake can help him and set him on the right road to recovery, so that he can design a life for himself. Sobriety is a lifelong journey, that begins with the will to reinvent yourself. I really hope he succeeds.
So looking forward to more and to the wedding fourteen years in the making. It's sure to be EPIC!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Oct 20, 2019 7:40 am Title: Chapter 13
Your writing is so engaging I really feel I am part of this family and all the slings and arrows feel so real
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 11:33 am Title: Chapter 13
Mel, Mel, Mel... Has she so easily forgotten that nobody stays clean during a custody battle? And, at her own omittance, she remembers Gabriel... so she should remember the lengths Gabriel will go to for Gus. Mel is NOT a squeaky-clean person, and Harry will be furious when all these truths come out in court. He will be made to look like a fool in a court of law. But, Harry must have a copy of the video of Michael's little rant at the diner. But, Mel should also realize you can't squeeze blood out of a turnip. So, how she expects back pay, when Michael made sure the well dried up, is beyond me.
Can I just say that Cowlip seriously screwed up with Honeybun and Lambskin? I shudder every time I hear those names. And what must Brian have thought when his son was being called the same thing his Trojans were probably made out of? I'm surprised Jenny still allows him to call her that at her age.
And touche to Jenny for pointing out Michael's obvious lack of caring. He didn't even sound upset... or ask how she was... just worked Brian into the conversation. When Hank came in at the end, I found that enlightening. The poor kid has had a tough life. Maybe he should look up some of those family members of Jenny's and Hunter's. I don't think they will be so quick to judge, and possibly offer to help. It's also nice to know I was on the right track regarding David keeping up with Brian and Justin's life. But then we got Michael's delusions again!
After Gus gets Jenny, he should have Mel's parental rights taken away regarding himself. I know he's twenty-one, but that would seriously remove her from his life. It should stop her from interfering.
How is it, David could owe lots of money... and not being concerned with paying for what he owes? And renting a cottage at the country club should run through his money fairly quickly. Because, I have a feeling it will be a LOOONNNGGG time before he works in his profession again.
That had to have slain Brian to know what Mel did to Jenny. I'm going back to the court hearing - Mel will be crucified.
YAY! A wedding in Vermont! I hope Michael gets photos in the mail of the happy couple exchanging vows.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2019 12:24 am Title: Chapter 13
Now Mel as a lawyer knows lying to your lawyer is a Big No No and get she was stupid enough to do it so I hope she enjoys the consequences.l
What Video?
Michael is more disturbed than Lindsay beca because even with the proof in front of him he only sees that Brian is waiting for him.
Moron Says Huh?
Hank should leave all the losers behind and forge his own path where he succeeds because of and without them.
He should talk to Brian and Justin he probably has some juicy details about his grandfather, David and Michael that could help in Gus and Ian's court case??
Brian and Justin are getting Married in Vermont!
They are going to cause an avalanche with the heat they are going to generate lol
Jennifer is going to destroy David and hopefully his Daddy too.
What stupid is Michael going to do now?
The Taylor-Kinneys Are Full Of Love!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2019 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 13
Looks like everyone is happy except for Mel, David and Michael. Can't wait for the wedding and Mikey's head popping open.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2019 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 13
An EXCELLENT chapter! I love the way the way the family is rallying to help Gus save Jenny from the idiocy of her parents. And Vermont is an absolutely PERFECT wedding venue for Brian and Justin!
Harry is going to be in for a rude awakening concerning Melanie when her lies of omission comes to the forefront. What's funny is that she really believes all of that mess in Canada is going to stay somewhat hidden if Gus takes her to court. She should know from personal experience, that while Gabriel might play fair, NO ONE stays squeaky clean in court.
As for Hank... I don't know how to feel about him, but I will be honest and say that I'm a bit torn because of how David and his grandfather have treated him in the past. It kind of puts a different perspective on his brattiness, and penchant for trouble. He really needs to find a way to make his life better in spite of living down to his father's expectations. And then when he makes good, I would love for David and his father to feel what it's like to be left behind by Hank. Perhaps the young man should talk to Hunter about how to make a parent regret their actions. Hunter is everything Michael and David never thought he would be. It would be a nice twist to making Michael go 'Linda Blair' LOL
And speaking of Dumb the First: What can I say except that Michael is once again setting himself up to be completely humiliated by living in his delusions. DUMBASS! I laughed out loud at Hank's assessment of Michael's brain capacity. Alone that drivel Michael spouted about writing the comic is grounds for having his ass permanently checked into a mental hospital. But then to actually continue to think that Brian is with Justin for charity, and that has any chance of even being considered a friend at this point... Star, please just have the fool jump from any bridge immediately. Perhaps as his bones are breaking due to hitting the water from that high up, his brain will actually begin to function correctly. Because right now, it's just painful to watch someone breathing constant stupidity.
Well, I'm off to torment him in one of my stories now. And apparently that goes for me, too, since I can't stop his screech and whine of 'Hey' in my psyche. I'm sooooooo looking forward to your next chapter.
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2019 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
Jenny has definitely some bad days to come, but I bet the family will find a solution to get her out of her parents' grip.
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
Give it up, Mikey. Even if you had the money... Brian wouldn't have graced the hotel and restaurant table with his presence. YOU CAN'T COMPETE WITH JUSTIN!!! You are so far down the totem pole, it isn't even funny! Pretending him and Brian were Johnny and Baby... *I think I just vomited in my mouth* WHERE'S THE BRAIN BLEACH! Ha-ha, Mikey... you have a hundred bucks to your name, and I bet you lose your fancy jeep!
BTW... was David ever able to culture Michael, so at the dinner parties, he didn't hold his fork like a moron?
Mel can TRY to convince a judge... but reports from Ben, Gus, Jenny, Justin... the list goes on. What Mel did to those kids, lied to them about Lindsay, and what she did as a lawyer... should speak volumes about her character, and the fact she shouldn't be a parent... at least until she gets help. AND... do you know how HARD you have to SLAP someone to knock them down and leave a bruise? That borders on abuse!
I'm extremely happy for Emmett and Ted. It sounds like their lives were on hold long enough.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 10:32 am Title: Chapter 11
I just wanna say, that when Patrick said something about the football coach, I had my fingers crossed that it was Drew. Thank you for not disappointing me.
But, is this following canon time... so, what? Emmett and Drew have been apart fourteen years or so?
David shouldn't have ignored the nurse at reception... besides... I find it extremely funny that the only reason he thought the guy wanted to talk to him was to flirt. AH... You're an Old Man, David... you should appreciate it if someone wants to flirt. See... forewarned is forearmed.
I say, smirking at the money he would have to pay to get rid of me... the ass wasn't even sorry for what he said or did. Not once did he apologize. Kudos goes to Thomas for being able to throw that in his face. David has spent so much on his 'boy toy' and his whims... I have a feeling he doesn't have a lot saved. And apparently, his kid isn't the next coming of Christ, either. Ut-oh... there went Melanie's bank too. I doubt David can ever get a job again. Mikey might have to join that street corner gang.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 8:34 am Title: Chapter 12
In Reality, Jenny is Unfortunate having Mel & Michel as parents, like living curse as seen Michel dime on everyone expense. I Would love to kick his petulant face, as even with Ben, Michel never really change.
Glad Brian & Justin are away from it. Justin is beautifully caring person. He once said "He could never take sides." He loves them equally. Love Sunshine. ♥ ThankYou for the update. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 1:47 am Title: Chapter 12
So stealing from David was supposed to have Brian think Mikey was better then Justin? How stupid can one person be.
Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:53 am Title: Chapter 12
Loving this story!! Rolling on the floor laughing at Michael thinking he could get something over the good ole Dr Dave....LOL
Can't wait for the next update, great writing as always!!
Liz
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2019 12:03 am Title: Chapter 12
Lindsay is finally ready to leave Wonderland she is starting anew with a clean slate and reinventing Lindsay Peterson, the past and the pain will always be there but she is learning to not run from it but face it head on while also coming out stronger in the other side.
Brian, Justin and Ian would be smart to just make sure Mel doesn't try to see Lindsay cause Lindsay is no ready to face Me just yet, that will take more time Mel did a lot damage and Lindsay can't face her right now.
Mel Hit Jenny and Deb Didn't Beat Her Down?!?!?!!!
Mel is losing all her power but she isn't losing the ability to blame others for her continuous screw ups this may have been the first time she hit Jenny but it wouldn't have been the last since Jenny is fighting back and challenging all her plans to stay in control.I
I always thought Deb was wrong to slap Brian she screwed up her relationship with Vic and Brian's reaction while inappropriate was a son grieving for the only true father he ever knew. (Always hated that scene and it was one of many of how others treated Brian while later running to him to solve their problems),
Jenny remembers Ben as someone who loved her unconditionally while Mel and Michael either used her or forgot about her entirely.
Patrick is quite a water stole surprised Brian entered the competition which sounds fun and would've had Michael screaming in anguish.
Michael shouldn't try to be clever his one brain cell is qualified to perform that function it is barely keeping Michael's head from caving in due to lack of oxygen,so Michael forked himself while trying to one up David who has left him to sink by himself in the mud.
I guess that means Hank left too?
Very Interesting Chapter!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2019 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
It's very good news that Lindsay decided to leave Neverland.
As for Jenny, she's not out of the woods yet, but with what Carl witnessed, Mel doesn't stand a fat chance, even with a good lawyer.
Michael's plan is exploding to his face and David could always work in another state, starting from scratch.
Date: Oct 12, 2019 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
I know i sound like a broken record, but really we want more of Michael the little shit. Emmet and Teddy and the rest nice and all, but nothing ever tops Whiny Mikey getting his ass handed to him or throwing a bitchy tantrum or being lambasted by someone/anyone!