Date: Sep 11, 2020 8:26 am Title: Chapter 8
Great Story!!!
Date: Mar 11, 2020 10:05 am Title: Chapter 8
thanks for update
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2020 2:05 am Title: Chapter 8
Great update. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2020 3:03 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow, I never saw this coming. An interesting and believable twist.
Date: Feb 15, 2020 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well, I missed your update. Not surprising though, as I have been quite ill the last few days, and have done no reading.
Did I misread that at the end? Is MICHAEL possibly the next victim? Or, was Michael possibly the shooter at Britin? - while trying to imitate the Green Arrow?
This is certainly a web of revenge you are weaving.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Michael did the shooting.
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2020 7:56 am Title: Chapter 7
This is very surprising! Michael and Melanie united to kill Justin with lots of collateral damage my God luckily Gus and JR are safe. I look forward to seeing your explanations of what happened.
[Report This]Date: Feb 13, 2020 1:53 am Title: Chapter 7
Now that is an interesting twist. At least JR is safe.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2020 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh great clues. But, I have not figured out what is going to happen. Hope it is as good as your writing.
Date: Jan 28, 2020 1:24 am Title: Chapter 6
Nice cliffhanger! TAG
Date: Jan 27, 2020 11:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Where are Mel & JR? TAG
Date: Jan 27, 2020 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
I've always been a sucker for mpreg... TAG
Date: Jan 26, 2020 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Brilliant - loving this
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2020 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
That's some chapter. We find JR but now Michael and Melanie are missing. Who is trying to kill Justin? Michael is the only one I can think of.
Date: Jan 26, 2020 9:56 am Title: Chapter 6
A lot of disturbing things are happening here! Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2020 4:25 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow, wasn't expecting this. Great update. Fantastic writing.
Date: Jan 26, 2020 4:11 am Title: Chapter 6
thanks for update
Date: Jan 26, 2020 3:54 am Title: Chapter 6
WHO KILLED SAM??? Melanie or Michael??? Or, someone we don't know? Did they hire someone?
That's bad that the arrow shooting demon is able to get in a shot at Britin.
Keep up the good work...
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2020 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Just got all caught up and want to know What The,He'll Was,Lindsay and Melanie Doing With Sam Auerbach?
Why The,He'll Didn't Michael Tell Anyone That He Knew Where Jenny Was?
Was Lindsay Trying To Forge Justin's Paintings?
How Deep Down The Rabbit Hole Is Melanie and Michael With Sam?
Did All Of Them Plot To Kill Justin?
Was Michael More Angry That Brian Got Pregnant By Someone Else Instead Of Asking Him First?
Lindsay got off lucky but I still hope she is burning in Hell if she was apart of this plot to keep Brian and Justin apart while also stealing from Justin.
Can the former agent be charged with a crime?
What new danger is headed their way?
Not surprised Patrick and Sunny are Justin's kids but they might want to look deeper into whether Melanie actually adopted Gus?
Good for Ted and Blake finding Happiness and having a baby along with Emmett and Drew with their two kids.
What about Ben and Hunter?
So Many Twists and Turns Yet To Come.
Thanks For the Update 😃
Date: Jan 16, 2020 9:09 am Title: Chapter 5
Michael would be in on it from the start which is not really surprising but what Mel and Sam are doing in there. Quickly follow please.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2020 7:50 am Title: Chapter 5
AND... The plot thickens. Mikey, Mikey, Mikey. You were in the thick of it all along! Little weasel. Tried to act like you were so concerned.
Melanie plotting with Sam? WOW... Bitch!
Can't wait to see how you pull it together.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2020 2:38 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, great update. Love how this story is going. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2020 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5
More links in the puzzle. Mikey being sneaky is no surprise, but Mel linked with Sam is. So looking toward seeing where this goes.
Date: Nov 30, 2019 11:33 am Title: Chapter 4
It's good that the twins are Justin's. The mystery thickens. What happened with Lindsay and Melanie? I hope they will find JR. Great update. Thank you.
Date: Nov 30, 2019 1:38 am Title: Chapter 4
And the plot thickens. I wonder if Mel has JR, and if Michael is aware of anything going on with her. He's kind of been quiet since running out of the diner.
And Sam is passing off Lindsay's as his own. He even got to Justin's agent. I hope the new agent is on the up and up.
Is Mr. Steward the curator that works with stolen art?
Staying at Kinnetik with Brian... was that just for during the work day?
Looking forward to more.
HUGS Cathy
Author's Response: He is the curator. 💞