Date: Nov 04, 2019 3:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter update. Mikey running out of the diner should prove his guilt. Let him try to deny, but actions speak louder than words. I can't wait to see Ben's reaction to what Michael did.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Oct 31, 2019 9:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael always the asshole. I hope all the kids will be at Justin and Brian to make a happy family. Thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 4:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful update. Oh that Mikey, I really have learned to dismise him in most stories. Terrific writing
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 1:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Good! Michael got busted in his lies and deeds! I'll bet he has a hard time explaining away the fact that he messed with Brian's phone to Ben and Debbie. Deb should have smacked him so hard that fire shot out of his ears! Immature Imbecile!
Anyway, I'm glad that they are taking steps to solidify their family bonds in all ways. Who knows what other foolishness Michael will try to split Brian and Justin up. Not only that but with the Petersons still around, there's no telling what they might do. Oh, there are just so many directions this can still take, including finding out what really happened to Mel and JR. Is it too much to hope that Michael might be involved in some way? Or at least, know more than his mealy-mouth is saying?
Honestly, I don't put anything past the little weasel, who is only known to keep a secret if it in someway benefits him. In this case, not technically having the responsibility of his daughter to upset his new lifestyle in favor of enforced parenthood might be as big an incentive to keep quiet than anything else. Just speculating...
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 1:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic chapter. I'm not surprised that Mikey messed with Brian's phone. The could have found out about Mel all that much sooner.