[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2019 1:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh my, the mystery deepens. But where is J.R.?
[Report This]Date: Nov 30, 2019 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Great story. Terrific writing.
Date: Nov 04, 2019 3:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter update. Mikey running out of the diner should prove his guilt. Let him try to deny, but actions speak louder than words. I can't wait to see Ben's reaction to what Michael did.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Oct 31, 2019 9:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Michael always the asshole. I hope all the kids will be at Justin and Brian to make a happy family. Thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 4:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful update. Oh that Mikey, I really have learned to dismise him in most stories. Terrific writing
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 1:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Good! Michael got busted in his lies and deeds! I'll bet he has a hard time explaining away the fact that he messed with Brian's phone to Ben and Debbie. Deb should have smacked him so hard that fire shot out of his ears! Immature Imbecile!
Anyway, I'm glad that they are taking steps to solidify their family bonds in all ways. Who knows what other foolishness Michael will try to split Brian and Justin up. Not only that but with the Petersons still around, there's no telling what they might do. Oh, there are just so many directions this can still take, including finding out what really happened to Mel and JR. Is it too much to hope that Michael might be involved in some way? Or at least, know more than his mealy-mouth is saying?
Honestly, I don't put anything past the little weasel, who is only known to keep a secret if it in someway benefits him. In this case, not technically having the responsibility of his daughter to upset his new lifestyle in favor of enforced parenthood might be as big an incentive to keep quiet than anything else. Just speculating...
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2019 1:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Fantastic chapter. I'm not surprised that Mikey messed with Brian's phone. The could have found out about Mel all that much sooner.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2019 8:26 am Title: Chapter 2
'm happy to see Justin and Gus back and be immediately accepted and loved by everyone. I hope Justin is the father of the twins and we will learn more about Lindsay. Thanks for the update
Date: Oct 21, 2019 12:44 am Title: Chapter 2
So glad Justin got a good reception upon his return and that he and Brian will try again. Happy Gus is back with the family and the possibllity that Brian's twins are Justin's. I like stories with Brian as a family man and good partner.
Thank goodness no Mikey yet, but I have a feeling whinney babymanchild will appear again. Can you tell I am not a Michael fan?
Glad Lyndsey won't be making an appearance unless it is in flashbacks to explain why she was in Europe and where Justin was when the accident happened. Can't wait to see what is next.
Liz
Date: Oct 21, 2019 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start looking forward to more. Wonder where Melanie and Jr are? Could Melanie be the reason they fled Toronto? Maybe she represented someone she should not have and was threatened........ Maybe witness protection and Lyndsey decided to run and the accident was her fault..... My imagination jumping out here....
Great writing keeping my interest in what is next.
Liz
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loves the update, & B&JG reunion. There definitely connection between Justin & kids.
You are Good. Kudos to your Wonderful writing. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 7:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
YAY!!! Wonderful reunion, and best of all, NO MICHAEL to ruin things! They have a lot of catching up to do, and truths to reveal. Even though the revelation about his conversation with Lindsay is long overdue, I'm still glad that Justin admitted he was wrong to hide it from Brian. It could have saved them the mess and heartache due to Lindsay's interference. But now Brian has his family back with Jus and Gus, plus two new additions. Things are definitely looking UP!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wonderful, absolutely wonderful Could actually picture them through each paragraph. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good Morning, Cathy!
So happy to see this posted... Love where it's going! I'm so happy everyone was excited to see Justin and that Brian welcomed him with open arms.
Now they just need to get that paternity test done.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 2:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Enjoying this. Not surprised that Justin had donated sperm and that it ended up with Brian. It makes everything work out. Can't wait for more.
Date: Oct 20, 2019 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
good Lindsey is dead, no more troublefrom her
Date: Oct 20, 2019 8:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmm very interesting start I see some fun times ahead
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 8:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this beginning. I can not wait to find out what happened in Europe with Justin. Why Lindsay was here I'm glad Justin and Gus are coming back to Britin where they'll meet the twins.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2019 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is going to be interesting.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG, I love this story right from the start you had me hooked. Great idea, wonderful writing. Patiently waiting for more.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting plot & beginning. I like it. I'm onto this New one.
How Sunshine got to ibiza, hurt. Though, I am glad Gus is with him.
Curious to know More. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very interesting and has a HUGE amount of potential.
I guess I have questions... hopefully, all will be answered. How long was Justin in Europe? How long in Ibiza? Did he go back to Italy after Ibiza? How long had it been since he had contact with Brian before sustaining the head injury?
Did Mel and Lindsay break up? Then where is Mel? How long was Lindsay in Italy - and how did she get there? Was she staying with Justin? What kind of accident was there? Because it sounds like Justin was walking down the sidewalk/street when it happened... Was Lindsay and Gus with him?
SEE... Questions!
I'm going to assume Justin had donated sperm, so that the twins - Patrick and Sunny - are actually Justin's kids. (Very Cute Names!)
Looking forward to more updates and finding out more back story.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2019 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! I'm glad that Brian is living his life the way he wants to despite Michael. For now it's sans Sunshine, but...
Which brings the question, just where is Melanie? If Lindsay was in Italy with Gus, then I can only think that they split up. Or... well nevermind. My sinister imagination is cooking up scenarios again, LOL.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to how you bring this altogether.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response: Hey I’m in for suggestions. Sinister away lmao