Date: Oct 31, 2019 5:36 am Title: Caught up
Hi again! Another mini-chapter :-) I hope you don’t mind!
While writing a review to another story, I suddenly realized that maybe I was wrong. Like often before, I was thinking about what a possible sequel to the TV show might have looked like and what they would have done to the characters of Brian and Justin. Unfortunately, series are always filled with excitement, cheating, betrayal and breaking-ups. Well, that’s surely not what I would hope for them. And I still can’t imagine that Justin would have developed as you portray him (at least at the beginning), but what the fuck. It's one of many options… But no matter, I hope you understand how I mean that. Yeah, I care deeply for them and I don’t want to see them hurt or mistreated, but maybe I was way too overprotective. This is your story to tell...
As you see, I couldn’t stop myself and continued to read… I don’t know what it’s about your story, because - although at the beginning it annoyed me to hell and I’ve already named all the reasons :-) – I find it nevertheless exciting and interesting. In this last chapter I even liked your Justin way better. He no longer appears like this smug man, he seems more thoughtful and apparently there is a mystery or a problem in his past years - who is "he"? Hopefully he turns back a little bit more into the amazing and sensitive Justin we’ve known from the series.
And I also liked Brian way better. From the talk between Brian and Debbie I get the feeling that his feelings regarding Nathan change. At the beginning he was just horny, then I was afraid he would start an affair behind Justin’s back falling for this guy. But now it feels more like he realizes that the fascination Nathan awakes in him has more to do with the fact that Nathan reminds him of a younger Justin and maybe this awakens a sort of nostalgia in him. So, maybe this dalliance with Nathan doesn’t turn into a sexual affair (and that’s what Brian also told Debbie, isn’t it?), but rather some kind of friendship. That’s at least what I hope, And I also hope so much that Brian opens up to Justin as soon as possible and talks to him. That he tells him about his dissatisfaction, how they live their lives right now. On the other hand… This isn’t the end of the story and I’m afraid this wasn’t the worst…
Author's Response: Hi, thanks again for your comments, thoughts and opinions. It's always great to get readers reactions, and this story will still twist and turn yet. Justin's history in New York will come out soon, just as Brian's casual school boy dalliance causes repercussions for Nathan. Sometimes I gives hints to the future and for the great efforts of giving your time to make a review and comments I can reveal there will be a wedding, a death, a betrayal and a possible life changing injury. I said I don't do fluff, but at the same time I like to balance the dark and dismal out with lighter moments of love and happiness. I'm trying to get the next chapter out at the weekend. Big Hallow'een family thingy to go to, and I'm having costume issues to worry about at the moment LOL More soon.....