Date: Nov 02, 2019 6:54 pm Title: Hide U
Hi again! I hope you could solve your costume issues! Thanks for giving me some hints! My goodness! Okay, death won‘t happen to either Brian or Justin. You would have given a warning through the tags, wouldn‘t you? Nathan… I don‘t know what to think about him. It‘s not that I can‘t stand him or wish him anything bad, but at the moment he‘s the intruder, the one who'll causes problems between Brian and Justin. But maybe one should see his appearance as a chance that something has to change between Brian and Justin before it's too late. And actually he didn’t do anything yet except to have a little crush on Brian, but who wouldn’t. :-) Regarding the marriage… As I can‘t imagine your story taking such a hugh twist, I can only see Brian marrying one person, and that‘s Justin...
So, this chapter... Nathan really seems to be Justin‘s little brother. :-) And now, he needs a place to stay just as Justin back then. In the long view, it will hopefully be at Deb‘s and not at the loft. And again, Brian seems to feel more and more responsible for Nathan, care about him, but as I still hope, more in a friendly oder brotherly way. Unfortunately, there won‘t be the absolutely necessary talk between Brian and Justin. I‘m curious about Justin‘s reaction, hopefully he won‘t go berserk. They way you portrayed him so far, I could also imagine, him thinking Brian brought back a twink for them to share. And if that‘s the case, I‘m curious about his reaction because that‘s clearly not what Brian intends to do... And I have to say, I feel very sad for Justin. He already wanted to spend an evening just with Brian and work came in the way. Now, he prepared diner and waited and waited,and Brian had nothing better to do than to run after Nathan, then worries about him and even bringing him to the loft. I still hope you don‘t turn Justin furthermore into the bad guy here.
Interesting chapter, again you left us with a cliffhanger, but I'm grateful that you go on regularly! I just can‘t help myself, I can‘t give short reviews, I hope you don‘t mind! :-)
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the comments. You can make your reviews as long as you like! It's good to read readers views. The wardrobe issue got interesting! I had my costume on and then, when my brother, who as flown up from Tampa, FL, turned up in the same outfit! We are twins, so the power of our thinking must have played apart. Anyway back to the story, the death obviously won't be B or J. But it will effect one of the more than they think. Oh, and did I mention that B and J will get a lodger, it just won't be Nathan! As for this chapter, Justin's take to Nathan?, his initial and next day reactions will be different. I update regularly as I can - my job takes me on flights all over the US (not as exciting as it sounds-just tiresome) so I get to get typing on the plane with whoever's sitting next to me trying to have a look! Anyways I'm typing off kilter, I do that, sorry....more soon.