Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2019 11:57 am Title: Absolutely not

Hi again! So, thanks for updating so soon! What I really don‘t understand is, that after Brad left, Brian and Justin still don‘t talk with each other about everything. In the first chapters your Justin seemed to be a jealous guy, always reminding Brian of the rules and now, that Brian has broken them, they still don‘t talk about it??? Or was it enough for Justin when Brian answered this „he‘s not coming between us“ with „I wouldn‘t dream of it“??? You wrote, that there will be a conversation, so I think, I have to be patient :-)

I just can repeat myself… I don‘t see Justin as the bad guy so far. He just lives the life he thinks Brian also still wants, and as long as Brian doesn‘t tell Justin about his dissatisfaction, Justin hasn‘t a chance to change anything. And also in this chapter, I like the way you present Justin. At first, he‘s very opneminded, friendly and unbiased against Nathan. I mean, considering that he knows Nathan is the one Brian broke the rules with ... He shows sympathy for Nathans family situation (probably also reminds him of his own). And I really understand that he‘s getting pissed at Nathan when he tolds Justin that it‘s only up to Brian if he wants to get involved. I mean, Brian and Justin are together for such a long time, they have so much history together, also experiences of violence, so it‘s understandable that Justin cares. So, yeah, I still see Nahan as the intruder and I only can agree with Justin…. Big Trouble! The situation between Brad and Nathan reminds me also too much of the situation between Justin and Hobbs. So, the trouble is inevitable… I just hope, Brian and Justin aren't getting involved too much or hurt….

Author's Response: Hi Yes, Chapter 15 will be the chapter you may find of interest. That's where they talk. I hope to get the next chapter up at the weekend. Sorry short reply this time, I feeling nauseous and poorly.