Date: Nov 29, 2019 4:30 am Title: Sandstorm
Hi! I come from Germany and we have something similar, called „Erntedankfest", but that isn‘t such an official holiday and therefore we have no free days. And it was already in September. It's also more of a religious fest and since I'm neither educated so religiously nor do I believe in God, it's not a day that I celebrate especially. But I know it's much more celebrated in America ... So I wish you a wonderful Thanksgiving and still hope that there‘ll be an update soon because I‘m so curious about the further developments :-) Warmest regards!
Date: Nov 27, 2019 3:07 pm Title: Sandstorm
Hi again!
„So, Brian and Nathan's Chinese: Brian changed his mind“ – Like I wrote, I was sooo glad! ;-)
„Brian on his breaking the rules: Yes, this is frustration due the New York fallout“ - understandable
„Danny/Stu on Nathan: Their plan was scuppered when Nathan bumped into Justin outside the diner“ – I thought so, but wasn‘t sure, because it never came up again
„Nathan's dad's suspicions of Brad story is still yet to come, so you haven't missed anything“ – I was wondering if Brad will have some more importance, so I‘m curious...
„I've sidelined Michael for a lot of this story, this is not because i am a Michael hater“ - That‘s completely okay, I‘m also not a hater, but I really don‘t like him very much either :-)
So, this chapter… Mel died and Gus don‘t seem to be affected much. That again confuses me a little bit. But even more terrible is that she has become violent towards Gus. Therefore, as awful as that may sound, I won‘t miss her any further in this story. So, again a cliffhanger, and regardings the outcome of Linds, it doesn‘t sound good… Oh, Gus, he really seems to be in the middle of puberty… I feel so sorry for him. This is a difficult age anyway and if he should lose his mother now…
I really liked that Justin asks Nathan for help. As I wrote before, I‘ll hope, they can build a friendship. I was wondering a little bit why Nathan didn‘t tell Justin about Danny and Stu and their lies at Babylon…? And I asked myself if this is a good or a bad thing… I really hope that Danny and Stu struggle so much with their lies that Justin quickly realizes the truth and doesn't fall for their lies. So, have a nice week and warmest regards!
Author's Response: Hey, I don't particularly like Mikey, I think you can count the number of chapters on one hand of his appears in the story. He's used when needed. The outcome of Lindsay will be in the next chapter. Mel nasty in the end due to losing her job and drinking, much of this Gus will reveal more in future chapters about his life with them. I hope to get the next chapter out soon, but It's Thanks giving. It's to the patents for the weekend, but the laptop is coming to! More soon. Do you celebrate Thanks giving ? If you do have a good one and too all my fellow American readers. x