Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2019 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Cynthia and Justin's relationship is getting more intimate and should be beneficial to the baby. It's funny how Justin is backpedaling with his presence during the birth.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2019 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Hi, just wanted to say that I loved reading this story on midnight whispers. 

Please note this is not meant as a criticism, but an anomaly I noted previously; in this chapter you have the Doc saying due date is end October but by later chapters it's Christmas and the baby isn't born yet.  Just thought you might want to correct this as you add chapters on here.

Thanks & hugs

Deb L

PS  Guess what?  Now I've looked at this chapter again, I've just got to re read the whole story on MW again - it's just that good! LOL

Author's Response:

thank you for pointing that out.  Obviously, I started writing and posting before the story was finished.  I will see if I can fix the timelines in the next few days.  So glad that you decided to reread the story.  I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it that much.  It is oen of my favorite stories.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 3:11 am Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Who would have thought, not Justin it seems, that there was so much work to having a baby.  Love that Cynthia is doing this for them.

Author's Response:

I had fun writing Justin freaking out about the birth, even if it is months away.