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Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2020 8:29 am Title: Chapter 14- Shopping For Baby

A little bit of shopping for the baby and a little bit of shopping for daddy 🤣🤣



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Justin had to reward Brian somehow.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2020 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 13

Brian was able to silence Michael; that's an exploit and Justin was able to keep Brian in class without his demanding blowjob and that's another exploit!



Author's Response:

I commend Justin for his stand on not giving Brian a blowjob at break time.  Justin does really know how to handle Brian.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2020 11:19 am Title: Chapter 13

I'm with Brian here - they'll figure it out as they go. All parents do. TAG



Author's Response:

Yeah they do.  My daughter thought my husband and I should go to grandparenting class when she was pregnant with our grandson.  Really, you don't really forget how to hold the baby's head and give him a bath. lol

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2020 11:00 am Title: Chapter 12- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

Laughing at Justin's education. Life is messy, hon... TAG



Author's Response:

And birthing those babies is definitely messy.  I had fun with this chapter.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2020 10:37 am Title: Chapter 1 Moment of Truth

Poor Gus. It's hard being a big brother. Good talk, tho. TAG



Author's Response:

He is handling sharing Brian and Justin really well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2020 1:34 am Title: Chapter 13

Brian did much better than expected.  I can understand not wanting Debbie to give them advice they probably won't need.



Author's Response:

Writing this chapter, I thought back to being a new parent and remembered the classes.  I could see Brian trying to show Justin and Cynthia that he was paying attention without pushing the envelope.  Debbie should not be giving anyone advice on raising children!!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2020 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 12- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

Lol I can so believe that Brian would balk at the actual mechanics of childbirth and visions of twats! Lol. 

Good little moment of angst with Cynthia statements about Brian sending a frisson of fear into Justin. I am glad you had Cynthia recognise Justin's distress and deal with it. 



Author's Response:

Brian is so throughly a guy, even if he is gay.  Many guys just don't want to know the specifics of childbirth etc.  While Justin is a little more intune with his feminine side ( not to say he is effiminate at all- just that he deals with feelings and likes to talk) he is still a little blown away about the logistics of the whole birthing thing.  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2020 7:14 am Title: Chapter 12- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

Ha ha ha! The way Brian managed to tell his staff that Cynthia was pregnant with his child! So typical! Also very funny: the way Justin is getting the gist of the birth and its messiness.

Still reading :)



Author's Response:

Brian is so straightforward. I could envision him doing something like that when telling Kinnetik.  Birth is messy and Justin wants a child.  He just is now putting two and two together regarding the logistics of getting said child born.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2020 6:28 am Title: Chapter 1 Moment of Truth

Great talk with Gus: it seems he took the news quite simply.



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin are aware that LInds and Mel are not happy and they want to reasusre him.  Let's hope they are truly successful.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2020 6:09 am Title: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

It's great that Gus is helping in the kitchen; maybe will he develop an interest in food and cooking: never too late to be autonomous. Disarming his interest in coming living with them will be tricky though.



Author's Response:

I think Gus senses the subliminal messages that Mel and Linds are sending him regarding his father's desire to be with him once the baby is born.  He is trying to protect himself.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2020 3:21 am Title: Chapter 12- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

I learned more about child birth than I ever wanted to know.  I'm glad I didn't know any of this when I gave birth.



Author's Response:

I guess I should put a disclaimer on the chapter.  (lol)

Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2020 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 12- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

     Still reading?  Oh yes, I go way back to The Stripper.  That was in 2017 and here I still am.     In this chapter, I would have preferred a little less of the birthing details.  At least I know that the chapter when the baby is born and the birthing, I will like Brian, will skip the chapter or most of it. 

  Anyway, thanks for the story, from the Stripper till now.

DavidR

 

 



Author's Response:

So glad you are still reading.  I doubt that the birth will be that graphic.  I'll keep that in mind.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 12, 2020 4:38 am Title: Chapter 1 Moment of Truth

What a wonderful chapter.  Brian and Justin didn't make any promises that they might not be able to keep.



Author's Response:

Unlike the girls, they are realistic and want Gus to know he's loved.  Thank you 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2020 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Love the idea of Justin painting Gus' room with stars! TAG



Author's Response:

Justin wants Gus to feel special

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Date: Jan 11, 2020 8:02 am Title: Chapter 9- Dolls, Zombies and Baby Monitors

Gus has great fathers. TAG



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin want to be fathers and show Gus he is loved.  

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2020 6:56 am Title: Chapter 7- All About Gus

I'm not sure Gus' moms will be happy to hear he's moving in with Brian & Justin... TAG



Author's Response:

They will not be very happy at all, but it is yet to be seen that his wish is what will happen.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2020 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Oh dear the girls have done a number on Gus and the boys will have to make sure he feels loved and valued 



Author's Response:

Lindsay is not happy that Brian and Gus are having another child.  She's afraid that Gus will lose his place of honor.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2020 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Justin is just now getting the hints that Gus hopes to live with them?  I hope he gets to stay too.



Author's Response:

Justin listens to Gus; something I'm not sure that his moms do very well.  We shall see how this pans out.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2019 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 9- Dolls, Zombies and Baby Monitors

Lindsay is so jealous and I can imagine her face becoming quite pinched and mean. I hope Gus feels loved during this week with his dads 



Author's Response:

Gus is treated like a precious child by Brian and Justin.  Not so sure that is how it is with Lindsay and Melanie.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2019 7:48 am Title: Chapter 9- Dolls, Zombies and Baby Monitors

Justin should limit his baby talks if he wants Brian's dick remaining hard, especially with Lindsay's permanent advises thrown at him. Brian's patience might be wearing thin after a while.

Happy New Year !



Author's Response:

Happy New Year.  Justin wants them to be perfect parents and at some point he might just have to stop telling Brian what to do.  Lindsay is obviously trying to intervene in places she should not.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2019 3:43 am Title: Chapter 9- Dolls, Zombies and Baby Monitors

Happy Holidays.  May Gus get his hearts desire and Lindsay learn to keep her mouth shut.



Author's Response:

Gus wants to live with his dads, this may be a problem in the future.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2019 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 8- Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Great reactions from Mel and Ben: Michael is living in the present with his mind still in the past when he and Brian were 14/18. He doesn't have a say in what Brian does with his life.

Yet, I like how Michael is dealing with his kids, especially Jenny Rebecca.



Author's Response:

I apologize for not responding earlier, I missed your reviews.  Michael is still very much living in the past and has a difficult time seeing Brian as anything but a playboy.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2019 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 7- All About Gus

Gus is funny with the way he prepared his bag and how he imagined his future living arrangement; will he dare asking Brian or will he wait to see how it turns out with the baby? Mel should think twice before saying that Brian and Justin will forget Gus or won't have time for him: I'm not sure she shared her time equally between Jenny Rebecca and Gus.



Author's Response:

Kids can be very majical in their thinking.  Mel should have always watched her tongue regarding Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2019 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 6- Its Real

I think Justin is going in overdrive with the baby stuff; he is over-thinking things and not being rational. Brian did a great job, grounding him and listing the tasks to be done. His work is so well done that Justin finally relaxes and suggests interesting places to test in a very short delay.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2019 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 5- Peek a Boo

Cynthia and Justin's relationship is getting more intimate and should be beneficial to the baby. It's funny how Justin is backpedaling with his presence during the birth.

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