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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2020 9:16 pm Title: Good News For One, Bad News For Another

Too short. And here I thought you would have us closer to rescuing the baby.  But I guess you are closer, with Marie's husband being a cop etc.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Marie's husband will indeed play a part in the outcome of this story, and you won't have to wait long to find out how.  The next update coming asap.  Thanks for the great comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2020 6:15 pm Title: Good News For One, Bad News For Another

Great plot addition to the story.  And the rope tightens around Heather and her lies.  Also, everyone, but Heather, knows that you don't cross Brian Kinney.  He will go to whatever extreme needed to protect what he loves.  Wonderful writing.  Now we need to get that baby boy home where he belongs.  



Author's Response:

When I first thought of Marie, I didn't think of her husband at all.  Then I got to thinking how ironic it would be if the one friend Heather made could be the one to threaten her securitiy.  I'm so glad you like where I'm taking this story.  The next chapter will reveal just how important Marie's husband will be in making things right for Gus, Jason, and the entire clan.  Thank you so much for your delightful comments, Mamab.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2020 5:51 pm Title: Good News For One, Bad News For Another

Will Marie's connection to police help Gus and Jason get back their son?  I hope so.



Author's Response:

Marie's husband will play a very important role in righting a terrible wrong.  I can promise you that.  More on that coming up asap.  Hug hugs, Grammy

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