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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2019 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

good one



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Pooh. Brian and Justin kind of cleared themselves. Ethan more or less admitted he abused Justin and Michael got thrown out of the hospital. Can it get any better? Yeah, Michael sneaking back in and getting himself arrested.

Brian talk to someone about the abuse he suffered as a child? Can't see it happening any time soon. Why would he want to stir all that up again.? Definitely can understand his reluctance.



Author's Response: Once Justin told his side of the story it was clear that Ethan was the abuser, and Brian was trying to protect him. Michael unfortunately doesn't get what he deserves, although the guys at Woody's give it a good try. Nope, Brian doesn't have anything to say about Jack's abuse, even if it still haunts him. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

one more chapter of Brian destroying Michael for the rumors he's spreading around and michael officially becoming persona non grata in Brian's world PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE



Author's Response: I'll catch up with Michael in another fic, because he really does deserve a good smack down... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Ha ha ha, the end with Molly and Jennifer!

The picture is a great one!

The call from Debbie to Jennifer is hilarious, while based on Michael's fantasy and false news.



Author's Response: Poor Jen, she got more than she bargained for having the boys recuperate at her house. I love that pic too! Debbie's call was so far off base, she deserved that tongue lashing she got from Jenifer (and a lot more). Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 6:08 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Yay, Michael is getting what he deserves.  Wonder what Ben thinks about all this?  I hope Debbie learns the truth, perhaps Emmett can enlighten her?  Brian and Justin are back together!  I really enjoyed this story.



Author's Response: Michael's tongue lashing, was perfect. Although he might need a little more once Brian hears about his temper tantrum. Even if Debbie hears the truth, it's hard to see her not defending Michael. Brian and Justin back together, would I have it any other way? Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Prisca512 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 2:57 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

Thank you for the wonderful anti-Micheal chapter. I really don't like that character and his humiliation after spreading lies was fitting. And Deb being put in her place by Jennifer was wonderful! She's so far up Micheal's ass it's disgusting. 

Great story, wonderful read. Thanks for sharing!😊



Author's Response: Thanks! It seems my muse can't help it, anti-Michael fics just flow from my fingertips... Yes, mother and son needed a good smack down after spreading rumors with absolutely no facts. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 1:58 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

So GLAD that Michael was caught up in all of his lies! Everyone now knows not to believe a single word that comes out of his vindictive mouth. My only regret is that Brian and Justin don't know as of yet what Michael has been saying, and haven't killed his comic book dreams. But alas, I am still content that he has been publicly humiliated along with Deb being put masterfully in her place by Jennifer. It's about time someone did that!

As for Ethan, is it wrong that I actually laughed out loud at his plight. First finding out that he can no longer play his bloody violin, then that he is being carted off to jail was magnificient. But then you went and gave him the big ol' HEAVE-HO from his parents. Even if I don't agree with their reasoning for disowning him, it's still gratifying to know that he is going to be totally ALONE, the same way he intended for Justin to be. Jail should be a really interesting place for him, especially with that incessant whine he has.

And lastly, Brian and Justin together, happy and healing is just the icing on the cake for me. I enjoyed this short story so very MUCH, Kathleen. Thank you for writing it!

HUGS and LOVE,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response: You'd think by now that the boys on the Avenue would know not to listen to Michael. But I understand that it's hard to resist wanting to get the scoop and Brian and Justin. Double smack down for the Novotnys, is was a long time coming and it felt so good to write. No, you can't help feeling satisfied learning the the chin-rat finally got his due. I wonder how he'll like the welcoming committee at the Allegheny prison? Let's hear for the boys! ha, ha, ha... Now you won't be able to get that song out of your head... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2019 1:52 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Time for a Little Rest and Relaxation

What a great story.  I really, really dislike Michael.  Fantastic writing.  



Author's Response: Thanks so much Darling! I really, really dislike Michael too! Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Prisca512 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2019 5:26 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

A scene I'd love to see-Carl leading Micheal by the ear!!! That made me smile😊

Fun chapter, all the back & forth getting to the truth. Glad Ted was there for Brian & to run interference for him w/micheal&debbie.

 

Anxiously waiting for the next chapter.  Thanks for 6



Author's Response: I liked that part too, lord knows Michael deserved it. Ted is a much better and supportive friend, than Michael could ever hope to be... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2019 2:19 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Sorry I have been having trouble with my ratings disappearing.  So I am doing it again. 



Author's Response: Wow! Five stars! Thanks so much ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2019 2:17 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

This story is really good.  So different from the usual B & J stories.  Now I can dislike Ethan and the whiny brat, Michael.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response: Thanks so much! Michael and Ethan have always been so manipulative to get what they want... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2019 2:03 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Great first chapter.  Never did like Ethan.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response: Yeah, Ethan seemed conniving to me. It was always so hard to watch him with Justin. Thanks for such a wonderful compliment. I'm so glad you're enjoying my writing. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2019 12:20 am Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Carl I'd my new favorite person , who hasn't wanted to pull Michael outside by his ear. Great.



Author's Response: Yeah, I liked that image too. Carl doesn't put up with any bullshit in this fic, lookout Debbie... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2019 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

It looks  like Brian and Justin are straightening out.  Ethan appears to be in trouble. Ted is being helpful.  And Michael has to pay a fine.  Don't know if he'll accept that he's not Brian Kinney's 'best friend'



Author's Response: Ted is a good friend to both Brian, and Justin. While Michael is just a pain in the ass, and not much of a best friend... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2019 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

YAYYYYY For Carl and Ted!! I absolutely LOVE the fact that Brian changed his POA. Michael shouldn't be allowed near a damn cactus, let alone Brian! Such an idiot!

I'm glad that Brian and Justin were finally able to tell their sides of the story to Officer Strickland. Justin's firsthand account and Brian's knowledge of Ethan's continual abuse should go a long way in convicting the Chin Rat. And then for Ethan in his arrogance to almost-boast about what he'd done... All I can say is CLINK-CLINK! Looks like he can kiss his fabled music career GOODBYE.

I'm sooooo looking forward to the next update.

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

Nichelle

 

P.S. Email me the banner and pics, telling me where you want them to go. I'm not sure why you're having trouble loading everything but I'll do it as soon as I can.



Author's Response: Now that Justin's set the record straight, and Ethan's stupidly confirmed it. He'll be getting a pretty set of bracelets soon, and a ride in the patty wagon. I'm thinking I may have too many pics uploaded, when I upload a pic or banner I just get a blank yellow screen. I'll send you the pics tomorrow when I'm bright eyed and bushy tailed... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2019 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 2 ~ Perception and Reality…

Well done Carl! That's how Debbie should do next time Michael's petulant temper shows up.

It seems that  Ethan is too stupid or too drugged out to realize what he just admitted.

I imagine how Brian is pleased to have to talk about his childhood.

 



Author's Response: Carl isn't putting up with anyone's shit, especially Michael's. Drugged, and stupid just about sums it up for Ethan, but Carl will be glad to explain it to him soon. Yeah, Brian isn't having any of it no matter how much the doctor pushes him. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2019 7:05 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Powerful beginning! Frightening also as Brian is hurt and will be charged for domestic violence.



Author's Response: It is scary, but not to worry, Brian's injury isn't that bad. Justin determined to set the police straight, and put the blame where it belongs, on Ethan. Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Ethan going to get his and so will Michael. If Justin can't or doesn't draw the Rage pictures, Michael has nothing but words. Hollow words. Let the idiot hire someone else to draw the comic. Michael would have to buy Justin out. Ha! That'd teach his ass.

Once Brian's back in top form that little greaser better watch his fingers. A couple of broken fingers and won't be playing the violin or punching people any longer.



Author's Response: You're so right what comes around goes around. Ethan has no one to blame but himself. He really should have taken those anger management classes. I agree Justin should dump Michael ass. Michael doesn't really even have any words, just empty caption bubbles with out Justin's real life story. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Prisca512 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Great start! Can't wait to see what's next. Michael obviously will be an ass. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you're enjoying it! More coming soon... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Great start to what is proving to be a pretty angsty fic. Hopefully, Justin will be able to get his story out with Brian corroborating the truth, and Ethan will be arrested for assault. Between him and Michael, they both need to be as far away from Brian and Justin as possible. And why do I get the feeling that Michael is more involved in what Ethan thinks he knows about Justin than is being let on. The fact that Ethan called him a whore and said that he wasn't going to put up with Justin's bullshit the way Brian supposedly did has Michael's normally spewed animosity written all over it, where Brian is the victim of Justin's machinations.

I can't wait to see where you take this, and how you get the both of them out of this mess.

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response: It's a bit angsty, but you know me I'm all about the love. Michael has a public smack-down coming, but surprisingly it's not from Brian or Justin. Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 6:34 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ How Did We Get Here?

Thank goodness for the TBC.  You know how you read a story and it's really good with a new view point you hadn't considered.  This is one such story.  There is also the what if possibility. I like that Brian finally told him he cared.  Wonderful.  I'm not too crazy about the way the police are taking what happened in a very wrong way.  Lord only knows what Mikey will spout off when he finds out.



Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, this one has a little bit of a twist to it. I wrote it as a one shot, but my beta thought it should be split into three parts. So, the good news is it's all written. It's easy to see how the police might misconstrue the situation, but not to worry... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

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