Date: Dec 21, 2020 5:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Great story, I love the fact that Craig saw the error of his ways and changed himself and also Nancy's opinions of being gay.
-K
Date: May 30, 2020 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
did read it again
Date: Feb 23, 2020 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
It's always nice to finish a story, right?
Anyways, I feel like I missed something so I went back, and yes, I had read the last chapter.
Why were Michael and Lindsay put in prison for six years? Michael simply lied about who beat him up. I don't really see that as a prison sentence... Lindsay either. What were their charges for a 6-year proson term?
But, just who did beat Michael up? Did Lindsay don a pair of boxing gloves and give him the old left-right-uppercut?
But, they are out... away from the family, having to live in poverty, and banned from the family... AFTER... they got to witness the bond and tight-knit group.
Congrats on another completed story.
Cathy
Date: Feb 22, 2020 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
brilliant story - well done
[Report This]Date: Feb 22, 2020 8:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Perfect ending and great story. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2020 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
An absolutely wonderful story with a perfect ending. If only Showtime would have given us something so great. Fantastic writing. Hope that you are doing well.
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2020 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
Really enjoyed this story, especially as I really dislike (understatement!) Michael and Lindsay.
Thanks, and look forward to your next story.
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2020 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a fantastic and wonderful ending. You manage to tie all the loose ends up in a neat bow.
Date: Feb 21, 2020 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
can you write lindsay approching gus, u know trying to get him to help her, and gus being like "mel has always been my mom and my dads love as much as they love my siblings".
Date: Feb 17, 2020 9:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Great update! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2020 3:27 am Title: Chapter 4
Well Mikey and Lindsay got what they deserved and Brian along with Sunshine came out ahead with two new best friends.
Date: Feb 16, 2020 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
thanks for a great update
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2020 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sorry it erased my rating.
Date: Feb 16, 2020 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Love when everyone, but Mikey and Linds are happy. Wonderful writing.
Date: Jan 31, 2020 7:26 am Title: Chapter 3
You made me curious, so I had to go look up whether or not you can get fingerprints off rocks, and was surprised to find you sometimes can. Thanks for making me learn something new. TAG
Date: Jan 30, 2020 7:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Complicated plot line... TAG
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2020 7:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the premise of this story. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2020 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay, a two for one. I'm so glad you worked it out this way. Can't wait to see them try to talk their way out of it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2020 9:01 am Title: Chapter 3
Mélanie has understood why Lindsay supported Michael and I think that now Gus will be happy with real parents Brian and Mélanie.
I hope Michael and Lindsay are going to spend a lot of time in jail
Date: Jan 25, 2020 8:22 am Title: Chapter 3
LOVE IT. LINDSEY AND mICHAEL SHOULD ROT IN HELL
Date: Jan 25, 2020 6:38 am Title: Chapter 3
WOW! I can't believe Michael and Lindsay... well I guess I can... but they went so quietly... I would have expected hollering and belligerence. LOL...
The police were lucky to get fingerprints off of stones and wood, and a match from the bombing. Lindsay wasn't even in the building at the time of the bombing. They must have had 1,000 DNA samples on file from the bombing.
All-in-all, good police work. I hope we get explanations as to why they did it, and I want to hear Lindsay as her parental rights are revoked, and when Ben tells Michael to go to hell.
BUT... WHO BEAT UP MICHAEL????
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2020 2:48 am Title: Chapter 3
WOW, This is great. Just knew it had to be Mikey and Linds. Fantastic writing.
Date: Jan 16, 2020 8:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is terrible. I can't wait to see what Michael has scheduled because I'm sure he did it alone! I hope after the truth Brian is going to kick him out of his life .
Date: Jan 16, 2020 8:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Okay, it's great everybody has faith in Justin, but the VERY OBVIOUS is being overlooked. Why are the police and Carl NOT commenting if Justin was the one to continually beat on Michael, he would have very bruised knuckles? Why aren't they asking Michael how Justin supposedly got him to this place? How did he get him out of the comic shop? If it was by force, I'm sure they would have caught the attention of someone.
VERY POOR POLICE WORK!!!!!!!!
If I had to gander a guess, I bet Mikey thought this up on his way to the comic shop, hired someone to do this to him, just so he could blame Justin. But...
TOO MANY PLOT HOLES!!!!
I am curious about Michael requesting they take Justin's blood sample... had Justin bled one time in the comic shop that Michael would have some? Regardless, it would take an AWFUL lot to prove it was Justin.
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2020 3:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Frankly I think Michael did it to himself, so I'm looking forward to finding out whether I'm right or not.