[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2020 7:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the premise of this story. TAG
Date: Jan 15, 2020 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
darn Michael and darn Debbie
Date: Jan 13, 2020 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm a lot went on this first chapter I look forward to seeing how this plays out
Date: Jan 13, 2020 6:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you picked up this bunny! I liked it the first time Deb posted it, and again the second time. Your first chapter brought us right into the thick of it. Ah, poor Mikey... dumpster trash.
Hopefully, he has amnesia, because, even if he knows who jumped him, he will probably still blame Justin. And with Debbie already blaming him... it won't take much. BUT... there would be a flaw with blaming Justin... he has no cuts or bruised knuckles... he has no vehicle to transport Michael clear out of Pittsburgh. So, not sure how they could make that stick.
Also, Brian talked to him at Daphne's, so he knows Justin was in Pittsburgh.
I have to tell you... at first with all the italicized words, I thought we were getting this replayed through flashbacks... before I realized it was the actual conversation. Duh...
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2020 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is great. Oh, I really, really dislike Mikey so you could have left him in the dumpster and I would have been happy. Fantastic writing. Can't wait to see where you go with this story. Hope all is well with you.
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2020 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Now this is a very interesting start. You have everyone pegged, just the way I like them. Anyone in that diner could have taken it out on Mikey. I loved how Kiki was the one to shut Mikey down. Looking forward to your next chapters.
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2020 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1
That's a start! I can't wait to read what venom Michael is going to spit against Justin. He should have stay in the trash! You didn't mention Lindsay's reaction. Did she help Michael to separate Brian and Justin. I can't wait to read more.
Date: Jan 13, 2020 8:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant. I know its not justin but i bet micheal says justin held him hostage and beat him. Cant wait for next chapter
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2020 7:21 am Title: Chapter 1
This is off to a very good start! So glad you snatched up my bunny! Can't wait to read what happens next!
Deb