Reviewer: Keykoles77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2020 5:07 am Title: Chapter 5

Great story, I love the fact that Craig saw the error of his ways and changed himself and also Nancy's opinions of being gay.  

-K

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2020 1:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

It's always nice to finish a story, right?

Anyways, I feel like I missed something so I went back, and yes, I had read the last chapter.

Why were Michael and Lindsay put in prison for six years? Michael simply lied about who beat him up. I don't really see that as a prison sentence... Lindsay either. What were their charges for a 6-year proson term?

But, just who did beat Michael up? Did Lindsay don a pair of boxing gloves and give him the old left-right-uppercut?

But, they are out... away from the family, having to live in poverty, and banned from the family... AFTER... they got to witness the bond and tight-knit group.

Congrats on another completed story.

Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2020 8:13 am Title: Chapter 5

Perfect ending and great story. Thank you.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2020 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

Really enjoyed this story, especially as I really dislike (understatement!) Michael and Lindsay.

Thanks, and look forward to your next story.

Deb L

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2020 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

can you write lindsay approching gus, u know trying to get him to help her, and gus being like "mel has always been my mom and my dads love as much as they love my siblings".