Date: Dec 31, 2021 6:26 am Title: Chapter 2
Just once i wish that Michael could've been the kind of friend Brian was was to him
Date: Dec 31, 2021 6:24 am Title: Chapter 1
That lindsay man she's always up to something. Aww you posted this on my birthday
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2020 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great story, sad its finished but looking forward to the sequel!
Thanks
Deb L.
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2020 11:26 am Title: Chapter 7
I really loved this update. You let us know where Lindsay ended up. Then you gave us an ending to Michael's fantasy that we can live with. Wonder how Hollywood works out for him. Great job.
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2020 8:29 am Title: Chapter 7
Great story. Thank you. So waiting for Daphne Takes Charge 2.
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2020 4:01 am Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful story. So happy to hear that there will be Daphne Takes Charge 2. Fantastic writing.
Date: Aug 08, 2020 3:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. Waiting for the next round.
Date: Jul 21, 2020 8:49 am Title: Chapter 6
Fortunately they don't need Lindsay to make a happy family. No one will miss her.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2020 7:56 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow, fantastic chapter. So much in such a short amount of time. Your writing is amazing.
Date: Jul 21, 2020 5:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2020 6:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lindsay is getting worse by the day, but Brian has Justin so he shouldn't worry about it.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Jennifer loves Brian because he loves her Sunshine
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lyns got hers ! I want the boys to share Gus
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
The Weasel got throw out Good for Brian
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yea Daphne Got them to talk and they are BACK
Date: May 15, 2020 8:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Daphne always knows what to do to help. Good chapter.
Date: May 14, 2020 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 5
Things are moving fast but I suspect Michael is plotting somewhere
Date: May 14, 2020 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
thanks for update. stay safe
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2020 5:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Daphne comes up with just the right things to say and do to get Melanie moved. Good job.
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2020 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great update. Wonderful writing.
Date: Apr 21, 2020 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like when Melanie isn't blinded by Lindsey's manipulations.
Waiting patiently? For the next chapter. Love this story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2020 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow, great chapter. Never did like Lindsay. Wonderful writing. Can't wait to see where you take them next.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2020 8:24 am Title: Chapter 4
Lindsay showed her true face. Gus is there for the money he can bring. Mel Brian and Justin will be great parents
Date: Apr 14, 2020 6:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, getting better and better, next we should be seeing Captain Asshole, Lindsay is locked up so it's will be his turn now, plus sooner or later Debbie is going to be coming with that sharp pointy finger and a quick slap. Maybe she should have actually talked to her son about his issues instead of a quick slap to the head. Maybe Carl can read her the riot act for slapping people, I love when Carl tries to set her straight, gives me a giggle.
Glad you decided to add more chapters to this, looking forward to more words from you.
Just one question, having OCD tendencies I noticed that you space your quotation marks, are you typing on a cellphone by chance. You might want to double check when you are finished for this, you have a lot of " Brian, instead of "Brian, sometimes at the end too. "
Again, thank you for sharing your words with us.
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