Date: Dec 31, 2021 6:24 am Title: Chapter 1
That lindsay man she's always up to something. Aww you posted this on my birthday
Date: Aug 08, 2020 3:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this. Waiting for the next round.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2020 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yea Daphne Got them to talk and they are BACK
Date: Apr 21, 2020 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like when Melanie isn't blinded by Lindsey's manipulations.
Waiting patiently? For the next chapter. Love this story.
Date: Apr 14, 2020 6:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, getting better and better, next we should be seeing Captain Asshole, Lindsay is locked up so it's will be his turn now, plus sooner or later Debbie is going to be coming with that sharp pointy finger and a quick slap. Maybe she should have actually talked to her son about his issues instead of a quick slap to the head. Maybe Carl can read her the riot act for slapping people, I love when Carl tries to set her straight, gives me a giggle.
Glad you decided to add more chapters to this, looking forward to more words from you.
Just one question, having OCD tendencies I noticed that you space your quotation marks, are you typing on a cellphone by chance. You might want to double check when you are finished for this, you have a lot of " Brian, instead of "Brian, sometimes at the end too. "
Again, thank you for sharing your words with us.
bec
[Report This]Date: Feb 29, 2020 4:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Seems Mel was unaware of how much Brian gives them. Talking to her was a good thing.
Date: Feb 11, 2020 7:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice little fix it!
Date: Feb 02, 2020 9:52 am Title: Chapter 1
loving this - there has to be come back in part to - cant wait :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2020 4:43 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really good, pity it's a one shot. Maybe you could expand on it a little more to show the reaction of the 3 idiots when they realise the gravy train has been derailed!
Thanks
Deb L
Date: Feb 01, 2020 6:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay Daphne she set the boys back on the right road. Interesting Mel only thinking Brian was paying $1500 cheater Lindsay and stirrer Michael.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2020 8:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story. It's good that Daphne read the riot act to them. It would be a little more in this story to know the reaction of the best friends now that they will be alone in the face of their manipulations.
Date: Jan 30, 2020 4:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh please tell me there will be more.
Thank goodness for Daphne. Can't see Brian's bestest friend going to any lengths to help Brian and Justin stay together. They both lucky to have her on their side.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2020 4:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story. I always like Daphne. Fantastic writing.
Date: Jan 30, 2020 3:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Rewrites are ALWAYS so fun... Cowlip definitely needed different writers or a large fan-base input.
It would be fun to get a second chapter of the three twits and twats' POVS... (Just Saying...)
I really liked how Justin took a stand against Michael and Debbie... also telling Mel not to call Brian an asshole... Justin hit it on a nail... we can all be that at times... and Mel should look in a mirror if she wonders who...
Daphne... what can I say???? Best Friend -- EVER!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 30, 2020 3:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this, but I would be even happier to see Lindz and Mikey TRY to get Brian back into their clutches and Brian know what they are up too.
Thank you for sharing your wonderful words with us. Look forward to more.
bec
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2020 3:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah for Daphne. I always felt that Mikey should have gone to Hollywood since he was so keen on Rage being made into a movie. Love how you wrote this!!!
Date: Jan 29, 2020 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story. I really like your twist. Daphne has always been Team Britin so this is a genius idea. I like it when Brian opens up and talks about feelings and I am a sucker for anything remotely anti Michael, anti Lindsay and anti Debbie.
I would love to read another chapter or a sequel about how they react and how they try to get Brian back under their thumbs. Maybe have Daphne rip them a new one when she finds out. At Deb's dinner maybe?
Anyway..love this story. Great work.
Greetings. Anja 😉
Date: Jan 29, 2020 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you, thank you, I loved this I just wish I could have seen Michael, Lindsey and Debs reaction.