Date: Mar 16, 2020 1:11 am Title: Race against time
Ok, thanks for chapter 13. But did you have to leave such a cliffhanger?
Please let there be more to wrap this up??
Sos, I know you're busy. Take care of the more important stuff.
One more but... time today... not sure yet
Date: Mar 15, 2020 11:48 pm Title: Race against time
OMG, cliffhanger. Wow what a chapter, but we are going crazy knowing if our boys will be ok. FANTASTIC writing.
Last chapter for now just uploaded... hope the end is not to much of a cliff.... It really can't be helped...
Date: Mar 15, 2020 5:49 pm Title: A way out
Don't worry Hun, just me being impatient as usual.
You're doing great work during this epidemic so hang on in there. Not sure what country you're in but I imagine wherever it is you are overrun. I'm in UK and used to work in labs so know how it goes!
I'm in Iceland. Chapter 13 is up!
Date: Mar 14, 2020 6:26 pm Title: Connecting The Dots
Just wondered if chapter 13 is on it's way? As there seems to be confusion as to if this was finished or not. Then it was reopened. And now it has round robin on it?
I really would like to know how this ends!
Really sorry Deb...
I don't know what happened with the round robin...
And I'm so busy because of COVID-19.. because I'm a lab technician ... no time to write.
The chapter is well on the way... But I need one day to fix grammar and spelling...
I hope you understand.
Date: Mar 09, 2020 1:55 am Title: Connecting The Dots
Okaay. This seems like a strange place to end this story. But I did enjoy the story, even if it made rather difficult reading at times! It also made me feel queasy that this was based on a true story.
Hope you have an epilogue for this or a continuation into another story.
Hi, Thanks for your review,
It's not the end, there are two more chapters but I won't be able to post them today because I'm stuck adulting at work :)
I'm planing a sequel because there is such a shift in the story coming up
Date: Mar 09, 2020 1:05 am Title: Connecting The Dots
Wow, great updates. Hope the good guys get there in time. Wonderful writing. Glad that Tag is helping you, she is a fantastic writer.
Thanks! The good guys are doing their best :)
Yeah, she's amazing, Love her. Her emotional support and cheerleading from friends like her are the reasons I finished. Although, to have things right, she's not my beta (so any spelling mistakes are on me).
Hope she get's time to read the story (wink wink) although I'll never write anywhere near her level. My English skills are limited to a degree here...
Date: Mar 08, 2020 6:28 pm Title: Is this the End?
OMG, caught up again on all chapters. Your writing is amazing. What a cliffhanger. Too bad all the rotten people didn't die.
Well... someone needs to stand trial and go to jail and get tortured while recovering 3rd degree burn
Date: Mar 06, 2020 2:35 am Title: Sunshine In The Rain
Wow, what a story. I read chapters 1, 2 and 3. Great take on how bad Brian had it, but it is a really sad story. Fantastic writing. Hope somewhere along the line, they get some happy times.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thanks for the compliment. I too want them to have happiness... let's hope so.