Date: Jan 01, 2023 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
Has this been abandoned?
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2020 5:13 am Title: Chapter 13
I so enjoyed reading this.Would love an update on both your stories.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2020 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Gotta love Gus. Junior smackdown champ.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2020 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ohhhhh I am loving this. Love when Ted gets mad and takes over.
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2020 2:33 am Title: Chapter 13
Sorry for some reason this site will erase my rating. If it was gone as I think it might have been. It is a 10.
Date: Apr 14, 2020 2:32 am Title: Chapter 13
Read all chapters. Love this story. It is wonderful. You have shown each character as they really are. Fantastic writing. Hope all is well with you wherever you are. We are in a "stay at home" order from our governor. Have to tell you that reading stories about our two favorite people eases my mind. I think of the story and not the real world for that amount of time. So thank you for that.
Date: Apr 03, 2020 10:17 am Title: Chapter 13
Omg Brian and Mel are going to vicerate Michael yay pass the popcorn 🤣
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2020 8:20 am Title: Chapter 13
Gus who innocently asks the right questions is too good. I can see Michael and Lindsay squirming. More please with punishment for Michael for speaking so badly to Gus.
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2020 12:51 am Title: Chapter 13
Oh no. Michael has really bought it this time. If Deb doesn't smack him, I will.
Date: Apr 02, 2020 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
Like I said, out of the mouth of babes,.Jesus Gus is going to give everyone an anurisum. Ha ha.
Date: Apr 02, 2020 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
The suspense of this cliff hanger ugh awaiting the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2020 4:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh this 'dinner at Debs' is so good!
Thanks
Deb L
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2020 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
Gus is innocently laying all of Michael and Lindsay's words out for everyone to hear (Take Note Ben!) Which is malicious and cruel to everyone who isn't them.
Melanie got some choice gifts from Gus, Brian and Justin that show just how much she is appreciated, I can see why Michael and Lindsay are seething but they don't get to tell Brian and Justin how they spend when their money when those two never have any of their.
Love when Gus sweetly pointed out how Michael never pays when they are at the diner even when Brian isn't around and then asked kindly if he was poor?
I just had to chuckle at the question.
But Michael's response is about to get him flattened or killed.
And it looks like Lindsay will be joining him.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!
Thanks For the Update 😃
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2020 2:23 pm Title: Chapter 13
GUS IS THE LITTLE MAN!!!!!!! I LOVE how he is putting Michael and Lindsay's crap on MAJOR blast in front of everyone! LMAOOOOOOOOOoooooooo! HELLO KARMA, and how are you today? Michael and Lindsay are the most MESSY people, and are getting exposed in a way that can't be refuted.
Hopefully, Michael's will get a freight-train fast fist to the mouth for talking to Gus out of turn. As for Lindsay's thoughts and reactions, I really hope that by the end of dinner, she'll be eating crow OUTSIDE of the family. It's so obvious that it's time to boot her flat behind OUT. Butttt, well there's still Gus to consider so where would that leave him? One thing's for certain though: Lindsay CANNOT be trusted not to try and retaliate against Gus.
I can't wait for these EXPLOSIONS (no way can they be considered mere fireworks) to continue!
Great Job and HAPPY WRITING!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 02, 2020 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 13
Love gus so savage towards michael and Lindsey love it
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2020 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
It appears that Michael and Lindsay got what they deserved and they aren't happy. They will be even less so when they see what Melanie gets.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2020 8:39 am Title: Chapter 12
Perfect gifts. I look forward to those of Mélanie. maybe Ben will take a clue.
Date: Apr 01, 2020 7:51 am Title: Chapter 12
Out of the mouth of babes.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2020 12:27 am Title: Chapter 12
I gotta say you picked out the perfect gifts for everyone. Let's hope Ben gets a clue.
Date: Mar 31, 2020 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
what is wrong with Ben? such an asshole
Date: Mar 31, 2020 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Love it ! The perfect gift for Lyndsey. Can’t wait until she sees Mel’s gifts she is going to explode. LOL!!
Michael should like his gifts, he always dressed like he was 12.
Liz
Date: Mar 31, 2020 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
So much fun reading this.
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2020 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
LMAO!!!!!! Vain-Witch and Bat-Boy got the perfect gifts! I even love the way they managed to diss Ben while still giving him something tangible to hold onto. I can't wait for Mel's gifts to be revealed. No doubt there will be plenty of tantrums and tiaras- aka Queenouts- to be HAD!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle