Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:11 am Title: Chapter 8
Gus is so cute. Lindsay will quickly learn her lesson I think and it will not please her.
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the update, another great chapter and don't ever worry about short chapters all are great!
Gus is so sweet to make sure Jenny and his Momma gets his love and Lindsey is left out and she should be the way she is acting not calling her son at all in the four days he has been gone. The gift he buys should be a mirror as she is only interested in herself.
Going on to the next chapter can't wait.
Liz
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great job! I really love that Gus is smart enough to know who his people are. Mel continues to prove to Brian that a DNA link doesn't solely make a parent. I believe that's a valuable lesson he will need going forward. And if he should have any doubts about it, he can certainly look to Gus and his Jussin's relationship for reassurance. As for the showdown on Sunday, YES! i'm soooooo looking forward to that. I wonder if while telling everyone that he and Justin are married, if he will also address Lindsay's spending. Hopefully while talking to Ted, Mel has officially begun unraveling her life from Lindsay's. We have a pretty good idea of what's going to happen with Michael already, and somewhat with Lindsay, but the issues with her will undoubtedly be a bit more complicated.
Now as for the length of the chapter itself, NO WORRIES! You have to write as you feel it, and for the record, many authors both here and in RL write scene by scene. So don't feel as though you have to keep up with some type of 'format'. For me personally, if I wrote scene by scene, most of my fics would be five-hundred chapters long LOL. You're doing a wonderful job!
It's NOT an easy feat to craft any type of story, while keeping the audience engaged wholly. So thank you for coming out of your proverbial closet and gifting us with this!
HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Mar 29, 2020 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 8
So Lindsay as been spending money like crazy and ignoring that Gus is gone huh?
After she made such a production about going on the trip with Gus wonder if Lindsay is cheating?
Glad that Mel has put away her pitchfork and is seeing that Brian was never the problem it was all and always Lindsay Wannabe Princess Peterson.
Yay Brian and Justin Got Married!!!!
That is going to cause quite the uproar but not as much as Justin perhaps selling his work for months and having a nice hefty bank account?
Or Lindsay having to explain what she spent the support money on when it is for Gus and Only Gus?
And what she has been doing the four days Brian was out of town with Gus and Justin that she was too busy to inquire about her son?
Yes Sunday Dinner Is Going to Reach Epic Proportions in Screeching😂
Thanks For the Update you are so good at packing so much in such a short chapter😀