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Reviewer: marie-france Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2020 8:22 am Title: Chapter 9

Lindsay is really a bitch. The illusions of best friends will soon fall. I can't wait to see their reactions to dinner when they don't receive anything and Mélanie and Deb nice things. Gus is a jewel he understands everything and does not hesitate to tell everything to his Dad and his Jussin.

I like short and quick updates even if I read several at the same time! Thanks for this story

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 9

thanks for pdate

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9

Yes!  I prefer lots of updates with smaller chapters than a long time between updates with long chapters.

Can't wait for the Delusional Duo to get the revelations and smackdowns they deserve, but then I am very much into Anti-Moron and Anti-Bitch stories!!

Thanks,

Deb L

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

Oh I see a smack down coming for MOMMY! Can't wait to see what she thinks about all the gifts for everyone but her, especially the jewelry for Mel...lol.

Michael and Lyndsey saying those things around Gus is shameful but not suprising because they have no filter. 

Jennifer needs to give her own smackdown to Lyndsey for her to even begin to know what Jennifer would like or not like is appalling.

Can't wait for more,

Liz 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 9

Love how Gus cares for Jenny and Brian is willing to help with her unlike other people.  Can't wait until Mel sees all they got for her and Lindsey learns she's not the Queen.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

Well I almost missed 3 chapters phew caught them. Wow they are finding out a lot about evil Lindsay feeding her son lies about Jen and Justin's importance in Brian's life. I feel that is going to back fire big time yay!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

Scissors are too nice for Lindsay and Michael how about a very sharp machete for both them with their names engraved on it?

How dare Lindsay be so dictorial about Jennifer and Deb that little girl is about to learn you don't screw with Jennifer and not expect a serious soul crushing payback Wasp Style.

Lindsay and Michael are in a world of trouble so they better enjoy their freedom while they can because things are going to change Brian and Justin are going to lay down the law and those who don't like it can go to hell because there will be No More Second Chances.

Gus is such a thoughtful sweet little boy but Mel needs to stop trying to protect Lindsay and let her deal with her consequences Gus and Jenny need more than what Lindsay can give.

Time to cut Lindsay's spending habits and make sure everything she bought is taken right back even if Deb and Jennifer have to stand over her while she does it then that money is put back in Gus's account and she doesn't have access anymore.

I Swear I Want To Slap That Bitch!!!!!I

Mark of good story telling when you imagine killing some characters with total glee and abandonment😂😂

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2020 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

I really LOVE Gus, and that he's spilling the beans on Michael and Lindsay. I have to laugh at how innocently it's all coming out, especially about Lindsay's stash of trinkets. Between Mel, Justin and Brian, Gus is going to grow up to be an amazing, and outspoken young man who is sure of himself and the people who love him.

Lindsay is such a BITCH! So in order to drive a wedge between Gus and the family who loves him, she implants these little digs into her son's head? What kind of selfish, spoiled... God! I wish there was a way to charge her with emotional abuse! Hopefully, there will be a way for her to get what she deserves; Michael, too because those two deserve each other!

Looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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