Date: Nov 30, 2021 5:43 am Title: Outtake 9 pt. 2
"I can explain it," I said in a small voice. - Haha, so hilarious... to imagine Brian at the age of 64 can't hold it up with Justin... But all in all they have a great vacation!
Date: Nov 28, 2021 7:45 am Title: Outtake 9 pt. 1
Ah, I just love Justin and Brian as granddads!
Date: Nov 28, 2021 7:00 am Title: Outtake 8
Oh my gosh! This scene with Brian and Patrick in Woodys and later at home is just so hilarious! How they get drunk together and Brian tells Patrick the story oh himself and Justin... Love it!
Date: Nov 28, 2021 4:45 am Title: Outtake 7
Even if it's a very sensitive topic, you manage to bring humor into it ... "That's the fourth guy hitting on him" :-) And then this moment when Justin remembers their dance! First a little frightening, but in the end so beautiful!
Date: Nov 25, 2021 7:44 am Title: Outtake 6
Oh that was scary and my heart broke a little bit. "A sob that didn't come from either of us distracted us from the fight." And even if it must have been frightening for Peanut and Munchkin, luckily they came in at that moment, who knows how this scene would otherwise have ended...
Date: Nov 24, 2021 8:40 am Title: Outtake 5
"The little shit escaped the tormenting talk." :-) That's maybe the hardest thing Brian ever had to do! And then "Want to watch a movie...." That scene is so hilarious! "Does that actually happen? In the toilet?" Haha! And the icing on the cake of this scene is of course how Justin walks in ... "what the fuck are you watching?" Ah, love it!
Date: Nov 24, 2021 8:32 am Title: Outtake 4
"Can't you wait to hammer whatever until morning?" Haha, ah, I love your story! But this chapter is not just funny - I feel so sorry for Patrick that he has to endure those other kids and their stupid questions. But yeah, as Justin said, they are kids and how should they know better with those parents. But unfortunately I think that's still the reality. I really hope, there comes a time when it doesn't matter to anyone who you love. But I fear this time will never come. I mean, look at the developments in our neighbor states Poland and Hungary for example... It's so sad and tragic! But I want to end this review with something more positive... It's so cute what a real romantic Brian actually is - a cd with their favorite songs and sometimes they dance to it... love this idea!
Date: Nov 24, 2021 8:20 am Title: Outtake 3
"He said that way he'd make sure he's our favorite again, and then he'll help Gus." Haha! Oh, and even if I can understand Patrick's jealousy a bit, I glad that Brian put a stop to it, not giving in to all his wishes. And sometimes it's good if one retreat a little bit. The walk in the park with Justin was good for Patrick!
Date: Nov 22, 2021 6:19 am Title: Outtake 2
I think this is one of my favorite chapters regarding the fun factor of your story... I laughed so often and so hard! A superhero or wizard with a wand of sorts... ballons... really? haha Then the ketchup scene.... But the best is this scene at Deb's. "They were having sex" and "Fuck the greens"... haha :-) They really need this week in Vermont!
Date: Nov 22, 2021 6:12 am Title: Outtake 1
"Give us an hour to get ready" - haha, Munchkin really started early with the fashion sense. It's good that Justin comes home finally!
Date: Nov 20, 2021 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 44
And it just goes on like in the previous chapter! Hilarious! I laugh so much! You did so great at how you gave their kids traits from the two of them and how they are confronted with it. It's so funny how you describe these scenes. "She likes to be dirty. I dont! I want my clothes nice and clean and perfect, not wet and dirty!" :-)
Date: Nov 20, 2021 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 43
I love how you describe those moments in their life.... it's so funny... "And Aunty Em?" He frowned. Haha :-) And this breakfast in bed is hilarious! I laughed so hard! Thanks for that!
Date: Nov 20, 2021 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 42
They are so beautiful, hot, funny and happy together! Justin is so right whe he says: "How about we're both extremely lucky to have met that night?"
Date: Nov 20, 2021 12:12 am Title: Chapter 41
I have said this often in reviews. In my opinion a quiet wedding suits them so much more than a big wedding with place cards and all that crazy stuff. I love how Brian would to everything for Justin!
Date: Nov 19, 2021 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 40
Oh Jeez, poor Munchkin - he's just too much like his daddies :-) And Justin and Brian are going crazy... haha
Date: Nov 19, 2021 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 39
What a bitch! And I don't understand, why should he at least know his birth mother??? What a bullshit! And this Evan guy isn't much better... "Was she a teenager that didn't want him? Or someone that didn't want to meet him" How could he ask such questions with Patrick being around? Oh, but I love protective Justin!!! And Munchkin is just too smart for those two!
Date: Nov 19, 2021 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 38
What can I say. This chapter, too, is simply great. I like how Justin and Brian criticize each other, but in the next moment it becomes clear again that this is basically not a problem because they love each other so much. And of course this moment when Ruby wants to be fed by Justin is wonderful. I was so happy for Justin. And then both kids clearly show who their parents are: "Speak for yourself" and "Foook" and "Asss-hooole"... haha
Date: Nov 19, 2021 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 37
Haha! And this chapter continues in the same way! "I'm so going to tell Dada you forgot to feed us." and "You can't buy me with unhealthy food." :-) And those are just to examples. It's so great how you picture them!
Date: Nov 19, 2021 10:22 am Title: Chapter 36
I could read this chapter again and again. Those scenes between Brian and Munchkin are so hilarious. Patrick is so cute. How you describe him... his innocent look... "I'm extra good, Dada" - Justin: "Yeah, right" :-) With those two words you told us everything what Brian has to face... "sitting cross-legged in front of his closet, head in his palms, deep in thought" - haha, there are so many moments... "Do you want to see my penis".... I laughed so hard and often during this chapter... Soooo great!
Date: Nov 17, 2021 8:05 am Title: Chapter 35
And finally they are complete!
Date: Nov 16, 2021 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 34
Oh, I can understand so well that those letters upset Justin especially after this repeatedly tragic experience. Although they are of course beautiful. And I also understand that he doesn't want Brian to destroy them. Maybe they should have read these letters together after Munchkin's birth, but well, then Justin might have been even more anxious about the second pregnancy ... So you solved that perfectly
Date: Nov 16, 2021 7:40 am Title: Chapter 33
Oh, heartbreaking chapter! And I feel so sorry for Brian and Justin and I want to hug Munchkin over and over. Ruby is a beautiful name!
Date: Nov 15, 2021 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 32
The first time reading this I needed those tissues... How could you put such a beautiful and such a heartbreaking scene in one chapter... the second time reading it, I couldn't give you a review because I had to keep reading. The third time reading it, it's still heartbreaking and frightening. Poor Munchkin! I want to hug him so badly... and Brian's not a freak... "Between sobs, Munchkin explained I was special and had his sister in me"
Date: Aug 08, 2021 4:04 pm Title: Outtake 9 pt. 3
I loved it!!! I had started reading this along time ago, but stopped. I started it over again the other day and just finished!! What a great ending to a great story!!!
Date: Jul 02, 2020 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just finished this epic tale and I loved it. So sad it is done. Will def revisit!