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Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2018 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 12

I really love this chapter. You let them be so beautiful together, so cute, loving and caring, equal partners. First, their talk about school and Justin accepting Brian’s help. Then, Brian actually spills his heart out, whining and crying. Some of these hormones would had been good for our Brian In the show I think. :-) Then, the way they’re naming the house and last but not least the drama about the tits. So well written, so funny… “Justin! Paper bag! Panic attack!”… “He snatched his hand back as if burnt. “Oh. Oh, shit!” Justin stole my paper bag, lying on the carpet, keeping his eyes shut. He’d gone pale.” Soooo funny! Thanks again for sharing!

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 12

Poor Brian. All these changes must be exhausting. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2016 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 12

Munchkin always has to have the last word.  Poor Brian.  Tits?!

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